AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Demon Made Flesh

by pryncessg

person >_<
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I really enjoyed this fic. I mean *really*. I thought it was one of the best fic I'd ever read. However, when I looked around online to see if it had been updated on other sites, I came across the original story - something NOT written by you.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=35104

Seriously? Excellent work on all the name changes. Too bad that the author has suspended continuation of the story indefinitely. What ever shall you do with nothing more to copy? Clearly if you're so stupid as to steal someone's work, you could never hope to write something nearly as eloquent as Crysede.

Again, it's a real shame. It would have been one of the best IY fics out there.
person CQT
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! It's really hot, I esp. like the lemon in Chapt 3 :)
I can also see Inu bind her and have his way with her until she passes out ::grin::
person Hillary
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow please make more of these please make more of these
person Feminafures
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter......the chimera thing was really cool, you really know a loout out mythology and these creatures.

Ja ne,
Gia
person Tori
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your writing style is so incredible. I LOVE your lemons, it's all so intense. Hhmm...I was going to say something about the plot...but...that last lemon scene made me forget all about it. Plot? What plot? LOL. Can't wait to see your next update!
person Lady sarah
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story update soon
person Lin
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! i can't think of anything else to say but... Damn!

Tsuki-san
person ddt
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm hooked!! I like the way you set up the deal and the finding of the chimaera. keep going, i wanna know where this'll go :)
person Feminafures
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW..I'll say it again, this is definitely different from any other fic on this site. I can feel the darknesss of the place with your words and you express feelings and settings with great detail and precision. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Ja ne,
Gia
person Tari
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um.. I'm not good at these so here g I I really liked the story and I can't wait to see where you are going with this story.