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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great!, and don't worry about others, it's your story, finish it the way you see it in your head
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It could be the best fic of them all, and I'm not overexaggerating. I really love your story, it has everything, comedy, romance, and pretty soon adventure, am I right? Update soon.
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Will Naraku take Ayumi to brag to Sango, Sess etc? That seems like something he would do. Don't worry about the chapters being out of order it's no big deal. Please update soon!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! the image of Sess and Inu getting their heads banged together was just too funny. What will happen with Naraku and Ayumi? Update soon!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was hilarious!! I mean Sango knocking their heads together is priceless! I can just her doing that in my mind's eye and I haven't stopped laughing. Please continue to update and keep up the great work!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job interesting. Suprised because even if Naruku lusted after her, hod hed he fall in love so quick??????? and I don't think he would have been so gentle
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay was hoping for a threesome in chapter three, enjoyed the talking but more action lol
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, that was pretty good! your writing is pretty good too, story line great
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the wait sweety. I'm sure all of us readers will live. Good things come to those who wait. Good luck on exams.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Need YoContContinue