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‘Take her right there on the ground like an animal…’ Geez woman! Yer trying to freaking kill me here aren’t you *gurgling on drool* What on gods green earth wouldn’t I give to ‘be taken on the ground like an animal’ *gack! Choking on drool!* Oh I so love when Inuyasha is hot for Sango… as you know, I’m not a real Kagome fan… come to think of it, Inuyasha and anyone is better than Inuyasha and Kagome, but Inuyasha and Sango are a pair made in heaven… Shit… anyone and Sango is a pair made in heaven (other than Miroku that is…) So why did the jewel start to purify itself in Sango’s hand… and isn’t she just a tease… telling the puppy she ‘enjoyed herself’ naughty slayer! Short and sweet, but good stuff once again. ^_^

My jaw just dropped so far it hit the damn keyboard! What a naughty, forceful puppy Inuyasha is *Sesshie sweetpea… run along and grab me that rolled up newspaper over there… Inuyasha’s been a naughty doggie again and needs to be punished!* I cracked up when Sesshie came on the scene… what was it again? ‘you managed to get your dick out of those baggy pants’ lol. And my gawd! If I damned near die and didn’t fall into hentai heaven when Sesshie intrudes, wanting to get in on the action *drips off of chair into puddle once again…* And then he does!!!! Oh happy hentai god! Please don’t let me go to hell for being wishing I was Sango right about now!!!! You’re a naughty girl Swiss Nights *winks deviously hehehe* Oh, how sweet my dreams will be tonight sweetpea!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace

The Sinner ~_^

Oh wow SwissNights… you have added so many chapters! I think when I first began reading this that there were only something like 3 or so? Anyways, I remember not getting back to you as to how good this story is… I love it! Ohs… Naraku is such a scrummy hanyou no? I like how he debates over whether or not he’s gonna rush off into the woods and spank his monkey or whether he’s gonna take Sango for the night… such a naughty half-breed! And how’s Sango’s form? Horny damned taijiya *melts* That’s right… I remember now… this story is falling into place once again *hentai grin* But at least there are more chapters for me to read *yay!* So Naraku has just finished giving our gal some good lovin’ and then Sesshoumaru sits back in the bushes and decides he wants a piece of our lovely slayer as well??!!! *drips off of chair into puddle on floor* Wahooooo! *drooling like a depraved hentai!* Runs off to see what happens in chapter two! {I think I remember her getting hot and horny with Sesshi and Inuyasha, am I right? *falls off chair in twitching hentai’d mess!*} What a delight SwissNights… thanks for the cold shower I’m about to have *hehehe*

Peace badgirl ~_^

This is one of the best copsed stories yet. I love the flow of you story
and the way things are turning out. And since I hate having to wait but
suck at writing (unless it's poetry) would someone with good sense and great
word flow please help out by e-mailing. I would love to see this fic updated and
running quicky. Plaese and thank you.

p.s. this really is a great story keep up the good work. =)

wow.. very interesting story you've got me hooked on... sangos a little slut,.... i love it.. you should definately write more... so far so good...

Ive been folowingr str story for a while, ever since chapter 2. Hurry up with the net chapter! this wait is unberable. Your story is great!!!

I hate to bee nit picky but the last chapter seemed like you were in a rush to ge pos posted. You never had the conversationweenween Ayumi and Kagome about mating with Naraku, only implied that it took place. Leaving it out seemed sloppy. Also I hope you explain what Tai ment by having kagome in the past in the next chapter. There were also a great deal of spelling errors. The story over all is very good and my advice is to try and not rush the scenes you don't like, even though they're not as fun to write, it will make the story much better over all. If I said anything already brought to your attention feel free to ignor this note.

where's the other chapter?! that makes no sense at all.......

How can u end a chapter like that and not have another RIGHT after?

Im writing a book myself and i cant even end a chapter like that without imediatly putting one after......

(((THANX)))

CANT U PPL UPDATE i seen the last date some1 reveiwed daaaaaaaaaaaaamn


PPL NEED TO REVEIW TOO

Good story. I like it very most.