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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ill screw you over if tjis ends sad!>{
person Savannah Griffin
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story! I was suprised by how many lemons that there were in it and that are sure to come in your following chapters! The only reason that I say that is because I have never read a story with so many in it, but hey I like lemons and they were good! It is a great story so far and you captured the drama and the love making very well. They were truely convincing and the plot to the story is amazing! Hopefullbodybody dies bee the that would just be totally sad and upsetting. Like maybe have Inuyasha and Kagome end up together no matter what even through death if that is the ending. But I will just have to wait and see for you are the excellent writer of this story! Can't wait to read the rest! Bye.
person yasha21
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate the past tense!!!!
person Danielle!!!
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey....
OMG that story is THE BEST story i have ever read......
im in love with it you are such a good writer its unbelievable you are So goood!!!!
mAKE SURE the ending is a really good one....it will because you can write!!!!
I can not wait to read more.........I was crying sp much when i read chapte
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like omg it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooood!!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!1
I LOVE THIS STORY WRITE MORE SOOON!!!
Blessed be!
Danielle
person Tsubaki
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute!! I can't believe that there are only a few more chapters. What if Kagome is pregnant.
person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grand darling brilliant love... are you english or wut?
person shaina
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man, it gives me a really bad feeling about were this story is going when you write in past tense. It was such a sweet goodbye. I'm glad inuyasha got the most perfect gift. That was soooo sweet. More soon please.
person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey english sup? i love ur fic but wuts the down low on Inus ears? and sango? ttfn ;D
person paoo
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is waaay too cool, the best one so far, its beautifull how you can make people feel the storyy
keep it up
person MC
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I'm almost scared of how this story is going to end. Inuyasha and Kagome are so sweet together. They're perfect for each other! I hope they will still stay together throughout this story. :)