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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person MC
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just knew something like this was going to happen. :( This is too heartbreaking. That chapter was really bittersweet. It was beautifully tragic. I want her to be selfish and try to keep him. KEEP HIM DAMNIT! Oh Inuyasha, sweet baby. I'm really frustrated with Kagome right now. Even though this might end a sad fic, I'll keep whatever little hope left that they might actually be together... until then~!
person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohmygodhrryupandpostrihgtnowifyoudont...
person Queen
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please Oh please don't late them break up. I'll cry if they do. Update soon please. Please don't late them break up.
person Spike of Doom
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope this doesnt mean the story is gonna have a unhappy ending... :( But it's great and im looking realy forward to whats gonna happen in the next chapter :)
person Soranji
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say I cried.
person Jenna
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!

I LUV UR STORI SO MUCH!! UR LYKE DA BEST WRITER EVA!!! I"VE CRIED SO HARD WEN I READ DA PAIN FILLED CHAPTER!!

I CUD ACTUALLY FEEL WUT DEY WERE FEELING, IT FELT LYKE I WAZ IN DAT SITUATION DAT I WAZ BOTH THOSE CHARACTERS

DAT DA SAME PAIN DAT DEY WERE FEELING, DA SAME HEART WRENCHING TEARS DAT DEY WERE SPILLIN WERE FRM MY EYES!!!

U WUD MAK AN EXCELLENT WRITER SUMDAI!!! KEEP ON WRITIN!!! UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZ CUZ I CAN'T WAIT DAT LONG!!


P.S. I USUALLY DON'T WRITE REVIEWS 4 STORIES BUT URS WAZ AN EXCEPTION!!
person Feminafures
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...words cannot express how beautiful this story really is. Between the detail, conversations, lemons, and pain of the characters I don't know what I like the most. I know some other reviewers commented on how Kagome is a weak character in this fic, but I can fully understand how hard it is to overcome self-hatred or self-doubt. Kagome's character is something a lot of people can relate to and I include myself in that category.

But I think she made the right choice for herself and has become a stronger person for it. Even if this fic ends in a say, ay, I will still be happy. Though deep in my heart, I do kinda hope for a happier outcome.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the last chapter.

Gia
person ...
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go.To.Hell.
We all hate you... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THE DAMN STORY! Ugh. I'm crying because of you! I hope you feel good about yourself!
person kaOtic
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Just read chap.45... I have to tell the people around me that something's caught in my eye! I absolutely love this fic! Keep up the excellent work!
person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay kikyo sux i hope you and ur evil little mind KILL her ass and burn bury and bitchslap her not in that order may >D