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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person INUKAG Fan
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Please let Kagome and Inuyasha stay together!!!! I love this story! Its so sad, hapyy and funny! All three elements to make a story perfect. Please update soon! Please, please let Kagome and Inuyasha stay together!! This chapter was just to sad! I love your story so keep on writing! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
person Candel
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Chapter 45 almost made me cry, my heart is all twisted and stuff...
I hope to God this is no the end... If it is could you write a sequel?
If you stop writting, and disapeare off the face of AFF I think i might hunt you
down, and chain you to your computer! WRITE PLEASE I beg you!
I love your writting style, and I know you have talent!

Please write more!
person Tex
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Luv your story to bits!! It has got to be the most well written piece of fanfiction that i have read in a while. The quality of good fanfiction just gets poorer and poorer these days....*sigh* But i just have one simple question, is it going to end happily ever after? gosh did that sound corny...
person Stefanie
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was sad. How could you write such heart wrentching things?? You made me cry. Please update soon. I have to know what happens.
person angelicwolf
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay first off...is that the end? please tell me it's not the end...please tell me that it picks up from there and she goes back to japan to be with him? i'm crying here! IT'S AWFUL WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO THEM!!!! THEY WERE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER!!!!! IT SHOULDN'T END LIKE THIS!!!! MAKE A SEQUEAL!!!!!
*calms down a little bit* okay sowwie i had to get that off my chest...absolutly brilliant story i loved every minute of it, full of information and vivd surroundings, great character development and way to leave people hanging even though i HATE cliffies! keep up the good work!
person shaina
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate kagome. She can get the same education where she is and she be be happier there. If money is a problem then she can ask inuyasha to pay for her schooling.
person Shadiyaray
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is some good S*&%!!!
I have never read anything so emotional. I am crying over here!
Inuyasha crying and making love to you at the same time.
Damn!
You are making me become more and more in love with him everyday.
person New Fan
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter broke my heart. I hope that they can find each other again once
she is finished with her studies. Update soon.
person Serenity
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome! luv it soo mcuh!
person Usagi no Baka
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wut the hell is 'chuffed'???? ~-
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