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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person sparkmaster
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have never felt electriocksocks when a guy touch me but all the guys I have dated were never as sexy as Inu.
person ladeekisz
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!! that was so good just like your other work
you brillant writer you!
^_^

Ja ne
person dragonflyelj
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG Maggz, I LOVE this story! you have to update it soon. Your attention to detail, the use of good grammar and punctuation, all of it makes for a very enjoyable read, plus the description of Inu, omg, DROOL!!!! hehe
person yourfan
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, wonderful, Amazing...you did a great job with the first chapter...please continue on...im going to read the next chappy now
person videl loves goKU
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two...was pure bliss....I loved it!!! This is a great story and I hope hope hope you write more more more...yeah I am stupid but I can't help it....I love this story sooooo much...please I can't wait for some inu/kag action...things are looking steamy...and you write so damn good! Great job...please keep it up!

~Videl loves goKU
person yourfan
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOO....you did a great job...inu is soo sweet...and kag is like flippin out...looking forward to seeing where this story heads...will they kiss soon? i know i know they only just met but grrrrrrrr i want more...hurry with an update...i want more!
person Ayame
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool
keep it up!! I'ts going great but try to update more!!
person liTtLeKiTtY
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great so far. Hope you write more lots more!!!!!!
person Ickabod119
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First wonderful opening chapter. I think Wild Silver is a great name for a band but you described Inuyasha in two words. I can't wait until you post more of this story soon Maggz!!!
person No One Knows
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one