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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person dragonflyelj
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Maggz, this was a good chapter. Like the jealousy that I can feel building about Kouga. I can't wait for your next update. Huggles!
person Kaye
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really doubt that it was "big brother" concern that made Inuyasha get all defensive. I think it was his subconscience telling him to not let her get hurt... not that there's a difference. Great chapter! Loved it! I would be great friends with Shippo, he threw Kagome into the pool! Great chapter!!!!!!
person Numisma
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
once again, muy excellent!
person videl loves goKU
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
C'mon im dying here...your story is like an addiction I CANNOT get enough of...oooo I can't wait till you update again...I love this story...you have Amazialenalent please please please keep going!!!

~Videl loves goKU
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter n Man Maggz. God but Kikyou is dense.. or self absorbed.
Wonder how she's gonna feel when Inuyasha decides he likes the brain better?
person tryxi
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just finish reading the updated chpts. they are great. i love the story so far. i hope u update really soon.
person LaBlanc
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Loved this chapter! Can't wait for more. Update soon!!! ^__^
person dragonflyelj
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Maggz, Loved the latest chapter! Gods, Kagome's mom is so stupid! She doesn't even see how she is hurting her own kid! And poor Kagome she believes what her mom says. Can't wait for chappie 6.
person LaBlanc
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter and love the way you make Inuyasha! Very original!
person Shadiyaray
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I fell like Kagome every day.
I am VERY self conscious when I look into the mirror or take a picture.
I need to be confident on my own, but someone like Inuyasha sure would help!!

Shady