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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Kalithja
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! This is one of the greatest IY stories I have ever read.
person Alura
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to tell you that this is an excellent fic and you are very mean for ending it the way you did. Keep up the good work.
person Kami
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! :) .... You know ... I love your story :). It's funny and interesting. It catches my mind soo hard that I can't think a any anything else :)))) But, I've thought about sth .... Inu is not quite himself in this story .... well, he's charming and so on, but he's too polite especially when he and Kag have met for the first time..... but I'm not jeark to mind sth like that because (like I've said before)I love your story. ;) Could you write longer chapers. please ???? :)))
person liTtLeKiTtY
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is geting real hot!!!! Hurry up and updata I wanna know what happends next though I might have a idea.
person kilame-chan
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh, is that a lemon I sense? I sure as hell hope so! I was just wonder, the title is called "When he was mine" right, so your not going to have this all be about Kagome looking back to when Inuyasha was hers and he really ends up with Kikyo, are you? You wouldn't be that cruel. . .would you!!
person shaina
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noooo! not a clif hanger! please more soon.
person Numisma
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
moer! i want more, damnit! and i love how you so accurately portray just how shallow Kikyo is, it's great characterization.
person Tiffany
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is getting really good! I can't wait until the next chapter! It's brilliant the way that you are building up the angst and confusion in Kagome's heart and mind over her and Inuyasha's relationship! Please update really soon!
Inusgirl
person Ayame
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kinda kool, but you know, maby u shouldn't let koga sooo into kagome, they don't fit.
I really loved it and i hope you keep up whith it.
person MOFAF
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the chap Maggz...der der what Kikyo is up to, wonder what happened with Kouga, wonder what Inu and Kag are going to do in a deserted cabin in the middle of no where...think I smell lemons in the future...lol