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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person p00h
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Your so mean!!!! hahah jokes but it's reagoodgood...man what's kikyo gonna think or find out when kagome and inuyasha together wanywanyways hurry and update!!! UPDATE...
person MOFAF
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaarrrrrrgggghhhh....need a lemon....need lemon, need lemon, need lemon

that was beautiful....BUT YA NEED THE LEMON!!!!!!!! please update soon.
person kristina
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you HAVE TO write a new chapter soon. wow this story is awsome. I love it so much. SO MUCH! Seriously, I like One One of the few Ive read in a while with a good plot, different from the rest, and didnt just go right into Nc-17 stuff [not that thats always bad tho eh??] haha, well, look forward to reading more!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!! Ya have to update quick cause I wanna know what happens with this! This story rocks!!
Inusgirl
person ME
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! just stretch it out a little bit further why don't you!!!!!! ^_^ okay....next chapter....next chapter will be 'it'....she promised........*wanders off dazedly*...........update.....update soon!!............
person Rachel
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is simply wonderful. I normally don't care for stories taken out of their proper settings and such but you do it so well! You have me coming back every night just to read another chapter. You're amazing, this story is so well written! I LOVE YOU!!! :) sorry. -Rachel
person Numisma
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
must read more! now! and i wanna know if Kagome really wanted Kouga doing what he was w/ her in that corner or if she was just too drunk to stop him...
person Kaye
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OKAY, so they're going to have sex... I wr ifr if he's just a little drunk. He sure did drink a lot. Great chapter, Inuyasha was jealous of Kouga, then again he WAS putting his hands down her pants. I loved the chapter, I'm just wondering if Inuyasha planned this, along with the drunk thought as well. Great story *bounces around* UPDATE PLEASE!!!! THAT WAS SUCH AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAY!!
well, what can i say?? you've got my admiration, and this is no lies, its th best fanfic i've read from this whole page. I'm not saying that the others are bad, not at all, they are great, but i still think this is the best one. i really liked the fact that they kinda fell in love at first sight!! pleast try too keep it up as soon as possible!!