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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person inusgirl
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!! This is such an incredible story!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I cannot wait until Kagome and Inuyasha make love for the first time!! Is Kikyo gonna be pissed when she finds? Ma? Man I have got to know!!
Inusgirl
person LiTtLe KiTtY
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting real good. Come on updata asap its soooo cute its her first time.
person dragonflyelj
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing to me Maggz! Oh man, I thought the cliffhanger was bad on the last chapter, and then I get to THIS one! geez! I have never been really huge on Inu Yasha, I prefer Sesshoumaru, but I swear, this story may convert me, hehe.
person Feminafures
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~throws a lemon at Maggz~ Tsk, Tsk leaving us hanging like that.... Lemonade please.
person Kaye
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Blink* You're a tease you know that? You love to make your readers suffer don't you? You just had to end it there! Good chapter though! Excellent, *claps* They admitted feelings! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Stefanie
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*throws empty pepsi bottle at Maggz* EVIL *throws a shoe* EVIL *throws another shoe* AUTHOR *looks around for more stuff to throw* OK....Im not happy. How could you leave the story there!?! Please I want to be happy again...Update soon!!! Otherwise Im gonna have all sorts of stuff to throw at you next time *evil glare* Oh yeah, i love your story >^_^<
person ladykaa28
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're making me wish that it was me with Inuyasha instead of Kagome. If my first time had been that way I might have been able to look past the fact that the guy was kind of crazy in my opinion. (Nah!!!!) But still it would have been something to look back on and remember with fond memories, instead of just curiousity. I'm bad I know.
person jazzyca
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit! i'm gonna throw you into that damned fire! just kidding! still, that was pretty evil of you. is it me, or are more and more authors doing that lately? anyways, awesome story, inuyasha is very.....different. but i still like him. please hurry and update
person KagoKitty
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh GOD maggz...and i thought I was the queen of cliffys...hope you already got this prepared for soon 'cause your gonna get a lot of unhappy, horny reviews to finish asap!! lol...here's one:
FINISH THIS NOW, DAMMIT!!
love ya,
=^-.~^=
person ladykaa28
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would say that Inuyasha was a free man as soon as her sister left with some one else. Inuyasha is all Kagome's now. You Go Girl!!!