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BEST FUCKING LEMON I HAVE EVER READ!!! I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 11 TO BE POSTED!!

YEAH!! now thats what I was waiting for!! haha, not really though, just another chapter! you always leave us hanging! haha, but its all good. Great chapter, your chapters are always amazingly well written, you just suck us all in! hehe, awsome job, you get a present! *Hands inuyasha plushies, cookies, milk and money* -_^!

Fantastic chapter! It was absolutely brilliant.

WOW, that was worth the wait and the evil cliffhangers. LOL...if I throw more lemons at you, will you write another one.

Ja ne,
Gia

What a terrific story. You're such a fantastic writer.

YOU LITTLE!!! OH! I love you and hate you!!!! Im gonna hunt you down, tie you to a chair in front of the computer and make ou type! and type! Oh wow this story is just so awsome. im like a grinning idiot. I AM a grinning ide\iot, then I get to the end and see the chapter ends!!! *bangs head off desk* I love fanfiction, Ill be waiting patiently (checking every 5 minutes) for the next chapter! congrats!

HEEEEYYYY!!! How could you!! disaster... you left us hanged!!! Nooooo!!
no, ok ok, i really liked this chapter, it was awesome, well written, i just loved it and i cant wait for you to post the next one, it's really amazing!!

REview for chapter 7: Oh man I missed three chapters over the weekend!!! Wow, anyways since I would have reviewed each one when they were posted if I had the time to get on the computer the last couple of days, I will review each chapter so that you don't miss out on the reviews I would have given...anyways great chapter of course likwaysways...you have a great wonderful amazing talent and i do hope you keep writing...but I have to be honest i don't like kag and kouga together...but i will wait patiently til the tides change...hehehhehehehehe! I trust it all goes along with the story so I am not worried...so on to the next chapter!

~videl loves goKU

Reveiw for chapter 8: Oh I forgot to make mention about kikyou in chapter seven...Can she be a bigger bitch? or more shallow? Probably...anyways I have been thinking about it and I believe Kiksuffsuffers from Narcarisstic (sp?) Personality disorder, in short peeps with this disorder think the world revolves around them and that they should be treated differently than everybody else because they are "special." The only thing kikyou doesn't possess that is a characteristic of the disorder is a fragile ego, in the case of this story Kikyou holds an inflated ego in abdundance! Ok I have said my piece...now chapter 8: oh a paryt and yaya kag and inu are together in the same place oh this should be fun...grrr inu better not fall to kik's ultimantum (sp?) ok well great chapter...keep it up...one more to review!

~videl loves goKU

REVIER CHR CHAPTER 9: oh man oh man this is where I tell you I can't wait till you update....grrr...finally some inu and kag action...not that the rest of the wasn't great..IT WAS!!! I just love them together is all. And if your lemon is anything like the lemon in your other story...Its going to bippiipping GREAT!!! Argh, I know kik won't let inu go that easily, she will try something else to get him to commit to her...hey could kikyou catch inu and kag being naughty when its time for her to find out? Just wondering, I loved to see her reaction...lol...ok well hurry as fast as you can with the next chapter, I am going to go flippin nuts...i love/adore/love this story!!! Can't wait for more!

~Videl loves goKU