AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Anon
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, I can't keep up with you..lol. You update so fast! Just Kidding...lol. You just made my night, great lemon! I love Inu's potty mouth!

Ja ne,
Gia
person Kellie
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another Great Chapter! I just hope everything goes smoothly between Inuyasha, Kagome & Kikyo. Can't wait for the next chapter
person Dee
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Kari
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was great! can't wait to hear more :) hope u update again really soon :)
person Numisma
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm, oh shit. the first time last night, he wore a rubber. but he didn't this time, did he? is he gonna get Kags preggo? shit!
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You mean the next chapter is when they're finally going to leave the cabin?! I was beginning to think that this whole story was going to take place in the cabin.
person Mimiko
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I *want* to review! Now, first of all, HOT DAMN! I think I can officially say that you write some of the hottest lemons I've ever read. I'm going to need a high powered fan in here, because seriously, this whole fanning myself with my hand thing just ain't working.

And they're leaving the cabin? Yay! Not that I'm not TOTALLY loving all the sex going on there, but I'm really eager to see some people's reactions to the new couple...Anyhoo, I'll be waiting paitently (if, by paitentlly, one means constantly clicking to see if this is updated, and re-reading the chapters to tide me over...)
person shaina
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey great blowjob scene, I've done all that myself. But hey listen, is inuyasha small in your story? Or is kagome used to giving blowjobs? Because usually it's hard for first timers to go all way way down to the bottom of the shaft.
person Kari
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I gotta say was, that was a kick ass chapter! hehe* a can can't wait to find out what happends when they get out of the cabin hehe and if they still see one another and all that goodness! hope u update again really soon. keep up the kick butt work!
person kags#1
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! u gotta write more soon! u r good with comin out with new ones every day! please write more soon!