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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Subaru
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter lots of lemons. I cant wait for the next chapter I bet it will be great! Oh yeah I was wondering what OCC or OCCness means?
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope InuYasha and Kagome move in together.
person yasha21
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so i was reding your story again and was wondering about something, and it could be that i am confusing some things but i was curious as to if Kagome is telling this story and her and inu were together and maybe kikyo was right and he was using her of if its something like something happend to inu, or something like that. i was just curious because its in past tense.

so could you e-mail me or something?


but i love the story and hope you update soon
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That damned bitch Kikyou! But now it has me wondering how this will turn out, she did have a very valid point about the car, and I had a feeling about it, that he had planned the night in the cabin. What would be cool is: if he manuevered Kikyou into thinking that she was the one to dump him, so he could be with Kagome. until the next time,
Fly
person valene
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yey i love this story is so fun to read...update soon
person Feminafures
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...Inu is so cute...lol. I really hope he is telling the truth about Kikyo, and not using Kagome, though.
person MOFAF
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonder what Kagome is going to decide

wonder if Inu will make that a permanent position for her in a more official way

hope so
person ladykaa28
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When are we going to start the Kikyo bashing? She had no right to say those things to Kagome about Inuyasha just to make her feel bad about the fact that some one likes her for who she is. She doesn't need the fame and glory to know that she is some one speacial. Just being with Inuyasha behind closed doors makes KAgome feel that she is tyhe most imporant person in the world. Of course that's after he has to tell her that so many times because of how her family has treated her. In a way this is something that even Kikyo didn't get. Inuyasha never wanted to move in with her, never even offered. That should prove to Kagome that what he's saying is true. Will we see Sesshoumaru and Rin this fic? What about Naraku? We could really do with out him, but I do like Sess. He just makes the story funny some times with having no emotions and setting Inuyasha off.
person ME
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you make me happy!! mmmmmm.....*grin*........happy.........................^_^
person Feminafures
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I read yor fic, I need a cold shower...lol. As usual, that was a damned good sex scene.