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WHAT A B-I-T-C-H + W-I-T-C-H= B*WITCH

WHAT A B-I-T-C-H + W-I-T-C-H= B*WITCH

Woooooo! Now that they have professed their love for one another of course the heffa has to show up. But this should be good. kikyo has to face facts that Inuyasha doesn't want her any more. But I know that the drama queen is only going to make things worse for her sister. Kagome said that she was suppose to be over a friend's house and here she is with Inuyasha. Most likely Kikyo was going to try to prove to Kagome that she could get him back. Or at least say that the first time Kagome had her back turned that Inuyasha couldn't wait to come back to her. I think I would be a good idea to let them talk. You know for Inuyasha to say something to Kikyo that would let Kagome get her things and move to another room so that she could hear what ever Kikyo had to say with out her knowing that Kagome was in the apartment. I know some of the things she will say will hurt kagome, but this could be the very thing to help her decide whether or not to move out of her parents house and into a place with Inuyasha. I wouldn't say it be a place to Kikyo could get to so easily though

Kikyo's come over to "visit" Inuyasha??? O_O Won't she be surprised that he's with Kagome? Knowing Kikyo, she'll probably try to barge her way in, saying that she "needs" to be with Inuyasha and Kagome is nothing compared to her! Ha! As if! But this will be a slap in her face that he's with Kagome and not her! Oh well! But Kikyo's devious.....what will she have in store for Inuyasha and her sister??? BTW, I saw the update from MM that you had updated, but I got here first! ^_^ Update when you can! Happy Easter!

uh oh, you must update soon, I have to hear this! Kikyou is there, what i gon gonna say? Is he gonna put his foot in it? Is she gonna notice Kagome, OMG, you gotta update soon.

I loved it and it is becoming my fav fanfic. Update soon. PLEASE!!!!

A truly touching story, and you won't believe how often I check the website to see if you've posted the next chapter! I'm really, really drawn by conflicts that you've put the characters in, and maybe it's just me, but you've made it so real. The uncertain, naive Kagome who's so convinced that she's inferior to Kikyo, but who's so very much in love. I can honestly say that I feel her pains, and her overwhelming love for Inu Yasha. The title of your story is "When He Was Mine," which, if it's from Kikyo's perspective, would give the story a great ending. If it's from Kagome's persive,ive, then it would truly be sad. It might even be easier if you were to kill off Inu yasha, but it's all up to you!!! I wish you would give us a hint though!

Keep posting!

Oh my God! What a cliffhanger! What is Kikyo doing here? Is she going to try to start a lie, by saying she's pregnant or that Kagome is cheating on him. That would be funny if she said that Kagome was spen the the night with Koga, that's why she's not here. Then next thing you know, InuYasha opens the door to let Kikyo see Kagome. That would be hilarious! LOL Oh God, I hope you have the next chapter written and will post it soon. I cannot wait to read it. This story is absolutely brilliant. I can't get enough of it.

oh man it's kikyo! Hoping for show in which kikyo goes home crying lol. No, seriously, I love this chapter. Sweetest one by far. *smiles* Can't wait for next one. P.s. glad you updated on my birthday. Thx all lot! More please.

What was going on with that cliffhanger there? You cant do that!!!!!!!! whats wrong with you!!!!!! Hurry up and write girl, hurry up!!!!