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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person ladykaa28
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok now it's time to kill the b*tch. She had no right to say that to her. Inuyasha got a front row seat to the way Kikyo treats her. Let's just hope that Kagome makes the decision soon ove ove out with Inuyasha. She won't have to worry about what her mother thinks about the two of them being together. I'm sure that her dad is happy with her. He may not say so, but I think that he liked Kagome more than he let on. But Kagome should see that what Inuyasha said was true about Kikyo and that she is just vindictive. She never did deny any of what Inuyasha said about her. She even added to it. Kagome just needs to learn that everybody can't work things out on their own and that misery loves company.
person Kaye
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo is a bitch. I'm not going to shout it because well, I feel I don't need to. Inuyasha better be able to fix this, and when Kagome goes home to explain this he better be beside her, that's all I'm asking of him. If he lets her do this alone, it will kill her. Yes the chapter was short, but I'm happy you got it out, you don't know how the suspense was killing me. But all I'm hoping is that Kagome does not leave Inuyasha right now. If she does, she will fall into Kikyo's lies. I figure she's gonna get pretty bad soon, when Kagome has to face her mother. Good, but short chapter. Loved it! Please update soon!
person Mayoko
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I LOVE YOU!!!!! You made Kikyo SUCH a BITCH!!! But, your right i will hate her more afetr the story. Tough i didnt think that was possible.
person robine
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH-how-I-hate-bitchyo-why-is-she-able-to-hurt-kagome-like-that-why-can't-kagjustjust-slap-her-accross-the-face
than-face-her-LIKE-A-MAN!!
^__^
person LadyCatBailey
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*stares open mouthed in utter and complete shock* Holy. Fucking. Shit. Kikyou is a fuc BIT BITCH! I hate her. I LOATHE her. Stupid cow! *snarls evilly and brandishs sharp, pointy sticks*

That was a truly remarkable chapter..Ki..Kikyou is an evil kiwi cow and needs to be drown without any delay. In fact, I'm offering up my servaces as exacutioner...*wink*...I knew that was going to happen-but good grief, I was truly not prepared for it. Kikyou was *harsh*, downright *cruel*...bitch...I was just praying to God Kagome would just loose it and beat the SHIT out of her. But, after having lived with her remarks...her own *mothers* remarks...all her life, there wuold be no way Kagome would fight back...

Gods, poor 'Gome-chan. She needs love. Hopefully slow, steamy love coming from InuYasha...*blinks and slaps wrist* Shit, she's in mental and emotinal anguish, and I'm going "Leeeemon...leeeemon....LEMON LEMON LEMON"...I wouldn't say no to one though...ROTFLMAO...

I cannot wait to see the next chapter, I'm on pins and needles for it. Maybe Kagome WILL be moving in with Yasha after all...*wicked grin* Teeeheee

Much Love,
Cat
person anhimals
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that bitch! who the heck does she think she is! argh! i hate kikyou in this story of yours! argh!!!!!!!! i want to know what happen between kag and inu. update soon!
person valene
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi, Kikyo is such a bitch i hope she gets whats coming to her...still love the story*_*
person Kodoku
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo is such a fucking bitch! Poor Kagome. Someone ought to feed Kikyo to the canibals, but they might die from food poisoning or her binessness might be contagious... kinda like the mad cow disease.
person Tiranth
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MAGGZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are soo lucky I'm not in chat recently cause I'd bash you! What a cliffie! Please update soon. I'm glad Inu said the "L" word. I was afraid she was gonna be the only to say it. Great couple of chaps Maggz.

Tir
person CANCAN227
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT A B-I-T-C-H + WITCH= B*WITCH