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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person angelstars
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh now that was a set back, i actually feel sorry for both Kagome and Kikyou. Kikyou must be torn also, but i'm guessing hers is just bitterness.. as for Kagome and her doubt that Inuyasha is more than faithful to his word.. i am loving this so much! I can't wait to read more.. and i hope for Kagome's sake, Inuyasha isn't a bastard and is everything Kikyou says he is!!
person Hanyoukagome962
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH that stupid bitch oh how i wish i could stangle her right now Kikyou you bitch. But anyways great chap and i cant wait till you update Ja Ne ^_^
person inusgirl
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man Kikyo is a major bitch!! She just needs to leave Kagome and Inuyasha alone! How similar to the seriescauscause she can't seem to leave them alone in that story either. Great job!
Inusgirl
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I hate Kikyo so much! What was InuYasha thinking... letting Kikyo wrap her arm around his neck? I bet the only reason he stopped was because he saw Kagome. What a jerk!
person ...
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! great chapter! keep up the good work...
person kittie le sabre
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The song I keep hearing when reading Kagome's emotions in this fic is "Fallin'" by Alicia Keyes. *shrug* go figure. The first person narrative works really well for this fic. It brings an intense iacy acy to the story that put us all there. I can as some points "taste" "smell" "hear" and "feel" Inuyasha myself. This works. Please keep going. It's a pleasurable read.
person Shadiyaray
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am not a Kikyo hater, but after that I truly despise her.
How could she. Poor Kagome. I would not want to be her right now. NOt knowing whom to trust. Inuyasha or Kikyo and then her PARENTS! THat would really kill me. HAving to face my mother and father and them KNOWING what I did.
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good
person CeltGdds
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! but a bit onesided-KAGOME NEEDS A FUCKING BACKBONE!! and so does her dad-please tell me that her, inu and that blasted socalled family of hers confront eachother and kag moves out w.o feeling like the whore kikyou is- i mean come on Kikyou probably lost it before her first period and she calls Kagome the whore? And INu and Kag need to discuss what when on btwn him and kik b4 she talks with her family so she can know what his side is and its true. BUT-Its your wonderfullly adddictive story(cant get enough I feel like KAg and iNulol) so you do what u want and thats fine with me cuz you do it oh so well!!!!!!!!!!!!#^-^*
(PS-Oh yeah and have her meet his family or something like that something Kikyou didnt get to do ya know?)

KIKYOU IS THE WORST FUCKING WHORE EVER THOUGHT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SHE DOESNT EVEN DESERVE JAKEN!
person Feminafures
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord that bitch needs to be shot, I can't believe she said those things to Kagome. I hope she doesn't buy into the stuff Kikyo said and Inuyasha helps her forget everything.

Please update soon, that cliffie was quite evil

Gia