rate_review Reviews

Wow. This story is unbelievable! You have an amazing talent for sex scenes!
I spent 3 days trying to read this story, just bearly making it away from the
computer to sleep and eat! I hope that you will be able to continue on!!

kikyo's a bitch. making kagome think like that. but inu made her feel alllllll better! yay!!!!! hurry and update

I've reviewed before, and like i said its the best fanfiction ive ever read. Its descriptive and is long but not long. Spelling is great and everything else bout it, but you have to write more chappy's. When he was mine is a great story ive already recommended this to at least 20 people (It's that good!! :D) lol, anways wirte more chappy's ill be waiting c ya

Really, I don't know why I've waited to review your story. I absolutely LOVE it. I've loved it since the first chapter. I love the lemons too. Yeah.. Kikyo is an evil bitch! She's a soul sucking bitch. I almost feel bad about how much i dislike her, but then I remember... she's evil, and it's all ok. I hope Inu Yasha isn't the playboy Kikyo says he is when he's on the road. What about Kouga?? Yay I'm excited, I'll check for updates!

From
Jessie

I loved it as always! I hope you feel 100% better. I know how you feel a litter cause I broke my anlke and I wan'nst able to update my fic. So keep up that great writing. Please update soon!

P.S.:This is a Kag/Inu fic Right?

I'm glad she didn't go home like she had planned. She is old enough to do what ever it is that hse wants to. Her parents know that she is 'the smart one' so it should be any problems when it comes to her doing whatever it maybe with her life. If Kikyo wnats to play that game with I'm going to tell on you then Kagome should play it too. She can out smart her sister, beat her at her own game and still keep Inuyasha. At first it was just a little battle here nad there, but now it's all out war. I say that Kagomkes kes her decision as soon as she gets back home. The very first day she decides to move out before Inuyasha has a chance to leave and he makes arrangements for her to get an apartment for the both of them, then her parents could go out and leave her at home by her self thinking that Kikyo is gone some where with a job. Kikyo comes back to the house and has an arguement with Kagomeut Iut Inuyasha and then the fight breaks out. Unknown to both of the girls their father comes back for something forgetten and hears what Kikyo says to Kagome and gets upset until he hears Kagome defending her self and Inuyasha. Of course he hears the fight, but lets them fight and returns to his wife. Upstairs Kagome has f'd Kikyo up enough that she will has to put on a ton of make up to cover everything up. Kagome drops Kikyo in her room and then takes a nice soothing shower, talks to Inuyasha on the phone tells him that she should be moved in to the apartment by the time he gets back, how she beat up Kikyo and whatever else happened during the day. In the morning her mom see what she did to Kikyo and starts to say something to her about it, but her dad for the first time in her life tells his wife to shut up and sit down, then turns and winks at Kagome. He asks her if there is any thing she needs for her new place. Yes in my little world Kagome doesn't know that she is carrying Inuyasha's child, her father finnaly stands up for her and she beats the crap out of Kikyo. Please pay please pay no attention to me I am on a sugar high. I just want from now on that every time Kikyo tries to out do Kagome, Kagome doesn't close in on her self, but she comes out swinging and she hits her target everytime. After 19 yrs of Kikyo always being in the spot light so to speak it's now Kagome's turns and the spot light is being by Inuyasha's side. I kind of want him to ask her to marry him and with her saying yes with out them knowing that Kikyo has heard them. Oh that would just kill her. Then just to put the icing on the cake that Kagome would tell Inuyasha that she was pregnant after he asked her to marry him. That would just not only kill her, but bring her back and kill her again. I hope you are feeling better.

wow they makeout waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to much. you seem to concentrate to muck on the sex, and not the story cant you have at least ONE chapter where they dont make out? the fic is hard to follow now you seem to be getting worse instead of better

Awesome lemon scene, but will u ever give KAgome a real backbone, I mean she was so close last chapter she needs to not be a mat for her mom and sis it pains me so that she is...but i am quite addicted to the story and love how ur writing it....PS-Kikyou needs to just die or become severly ugly on the outside as well as in.

Wow. I really love your fic. CH: 23 has to be mine fav chapter. Keep up the good work.

this is by far the one of the best sts i\s i've ever read, its so intense and so sexy ^.^ i hate kikyou! yayness...or booness, whatever, anyways i hope you update soon, its so damn good *purr* ^-_-^