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ohhhhhhhh gosh i hate cliffy's ....but i'll deal, loves....koga was so sweet...*_*

*twitch* Hopefully this will turn out all right... even with the looming affect of Naraku. Love the story. And hopefully Inuyasha will TRUST Kag, it would be a shame if he didn't. Shows how much he loves her.

Wow. I mean, really, wow. I needed a cigarette after some of those chapters...AND I DON'T SMOKE!!!! I have been keeping up with your story pretty regularly, and I thought I had reviewed at least once, but I haven't. So, here I am! You are doing an amazing job with this story. I am really pelased with where this is going, though if I were Kagome I would have to kick Inu's ass every now and then. Predatorial men are a turnoff...Blech. Not that it doesn't work for this story! It should cause some problems sooner or later...Sooner if the ending of chapter 25 was any clue. I like the amity ity of everything concerning Inuyasha. I, as a reader, am not entirely sure of whether or not Inuyasha is being sincere. It is most definitely implied, but the vibes from Kikyo and Kouga say something else. It is hard to tell whether or not Kikyo is JUST jealous, or whether there is a grain of truth in all of her bullshit. Of course, Kouga is jealous so that taints anything he would have to say. But I LOVE that. I like not being entirely sure where this story is headed. So many stories are straight forward and very vanilla, but I think this one is goio beo be different. KUDOS FOR YOU!

Excellent chapters, Maggz. I can't wait to see how Inu reacts to Kagome's words, she was caught in a very compromising position...lol.

Ja ne,
Gia

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OK... sniff sniff... I need a new WHWM fix.... As for the reviewer who said way to much sex... to quote Inuyasha "Feh!" He's leaving in what.... 3 - 4 days for a month? ummm... think that's alot wait till he comes back after being gone for a month.... I remember deployments...

Wow... first of all, let htis be a happy ending! Secondly you can kill her by throwing her into water. YES WATER! I love this story but please make it a happy ending! I usually love angst but Kagome is just so depressed right now!

That was no emotional. I do not think that I have ever read a love making scene so intense and emotional.
It made me cry.

Perfect.

I just read this story... and all I can say is... WOW!!! this story rocks! I love love, love,love love triangles!!
Ewwww Kikyo's such a bitch!! She reminds me of my annoying cousin!! So shallow and conceited! Kagome
should just hit her!!! A few times! then she won't be so pretty!! hehehehe, j/k. But this story is amazing!
I can't wait till you write the next chapter. I hope you feel better. ^_^