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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person WaterGoddess9(author)
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey chika! I must say that was an excellent chapter. I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I haven't really gotten the chance to read any fics, but please update...that sounds so demanding, lol ^_^
person ladykaa28
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that they can work things out enough that when he leaves in the morning that she has the confidence to stand up for her self andbe ready to move in with him when he returns. Of course me being me I love it if she were pregnant. Kikyo would be furious that Kagome had accomplished something with Inuyasha that she her self had not.
person inuyouki0718
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your storys great. can't wait till u update.
person Kaye
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. Kouga and her are still friends. Really like the story, though I'm just wondering if Kagome is going to face her parents alone. That won't be good. Love the chapter!
person New Fan
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. How will Kagome deal with Inuyasha gone for a month.Will she survive? Update soon.
person ladykaa28
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was too good to be true that Kikyo could work on her on. So enter Naraku to try and steal Kagome from Inu just so that Kikyo can get him back.
person ladykaa28
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I just read the last chapter. I guess I have to wait on Naraku coming in and messing things up. Kouga should know that you should never comfort some one else's girlfriend when they feel vunerable. I think he did that purposely to make Inuyasha think that Kagome is just slut. Most likely he is trying to help Kikyo get back at Kagome. It just has Kikyo written all over it. Kouga is probably mead because Inuyasha wanted Kagome and he wouldn't let any one else have her.
person shaina
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, two updates at once, awsome. Anyway, why did she kiss kougathouthought she was in love with inuyasha. God, she better explain that well before he leaves. I don't them parting on bad terms right before she goes to see her parents. More soon please.
person spicypopcorn
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! u actualad aad apterpter where they didnt make out! *clappes* very good! starting to get abck into the flow...
person Melissa
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This stpry is like an addiction! Wow, you really know how to write what women want, not being exactly sure what that ius myself, lol. The intensity of the story is unreal, and the passion doesn't die. Just wanted to say WOW! Please keep writing! I can't wait to hear what happens next.