rate_review Reviews

amazing story second to the last chapter made me cry . u should 'rite a sequels to it.

ummm could u pleaze e-mail me and tell me wether hes usng her or not pleaze!!! i dont get it!!

I read the whole story and let me tell u that is a hell of s atory THIS IS WAT ENSPIRED TO BE THE BEST FANFIC WRITE ON AFF (THAT WAS LAST YEAR lol) but anyways i really liked it!!

OMG! I absolutely loved this...I ouldn't stop reading! You are a master!

I just finished reading this story first I must say I have never read a story or anything with as much sex in it as this story had I think I was blushing the entire time I read it. :) But it was an incredible tale towards the end there you really had me worried I was afraid soemthing was going to happen to Inuyasha or that it was not going to have a happy ending I think I would have cried if it did not have a happy ending. The ending was so perfact to how incredibley sweet. Fun story!

Wow....Lynne has stopped reading to say, just wow. I knew Kikyo was evil. And I never really liked her very much. But this...it kinda makes me want to pull her long, pretty black hair out strand by strand and then make a rope with it and hang her. (How pleasant!) Anyway, I really have to say, this story is amazing. I know I said it back in my (god only knows...chapter 2?) review, but it's true. You've got a real talent for making the story real, with the lovely lemons in place as well. I really like this story, and I can't wait to keep reading!!

Ja ne,
Lynne

Wow! This is a good story. I just stumbled upon AFF.net, with my friend sending me "you have the right to remain silent" (I think that was the title?), and I decided to read another of your works. I'm glad I did! I'm excited to see how this works out. Usually, you have Inuyasha being the star and Kagome knowing him or something like that, but I've never seen Kikyo thrown into the mix like this! I can't wait to see what happens next chapter!

Also, just a little nit-picky thing; there are some grammar/spelling stuff in the first and second chapter that I noticed, maybe just typos or something, but enough to cause confusion. Maybe you would wanna go back and fix it? I dunno, I know this is complete, so it can be a pain. Sorry if it annoys you that I correct you, but I wanted to say something!!

Enjoy your new year.
Ja ne,
Lynne

I LOVED THE STORY !!

that was one of the best fanfictions i have ever read i wish you would have wrote what happens after the plane but other than that it was perfect

I loved this story. It was sweet and sad. You are a great lemon writer. I can't wait to read more of your work. ^_^