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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person inuyouki0718
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo sad. u just got to get them back together soon.
person yasha21
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! i love updates, and you always have lots of them. keep up the updating!!!
person Kaye
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter is the chapter where everything goes down the tube ain't it? She has to go back home, woho! *note the sarcasm* Loved the chapter, and I love the story!
person friendlyreader
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*.......*sings* cause i'm a leavin' on a jet plane, i don't know when i'll be back again......

yea, i caught that. good times. as of now, im on the verge of tears, but i will be strong!!!
oh!! ive always wanted to ask, the title "when he was mine", is that a warning of the ending? cause if it is *shakes fist* i want to see a happy inu/kag ending buddy!! keep up the great work and update soon!
person Jazmine
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are a great writer. You should really make this a career. you have talent
person StoneDragonRuby
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!

What an awesome fic. So far I have read up to the part where he has taken Kagome to his friend's place but all of the stuff before including your lemons are really good, even though Inu's "gutter mouth" is kinda ify for me. Still, I like what you've put together here so far.

Keep up the good work and come a see mine when you have the chance.

SDR
person Nay-Nay
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love the story are you going to wright eney more? i hope so i relly love it and i read all of it in 2 days all 26 chapters and i hope that you well do another chapter and just to let you know i love happy ending's so are you going to make it a happy ending? i relly hope so well bye for know... love Nay-Nay
person Queen
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I loved it! So update soon! Please! Oh please do another lemon.
person Stefanie
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....all shit is gonna break loose once Kagome gets home. As for Kikyou...is there some way to kill her off?? LOL J/K. Kagome is to loving to want to see her sister dead. But Kikyou is being a huge bitch in this story. Please update soon...i cant wait! :)
person Nay-Nay
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are doing a good job. and just to let you know i love happy endings. and can not wate for chapter 27.love Nay-Nay