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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Brittney
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this one is so good I love it so much. And I hope that there is more. And that maby it will be a happy ending hopefully...
And you are such a good wrighter too, well i have to go i have school in the moning. Well please do more Chapters PLEASE this story is getting rely rely good.And you are so good at it . Well i relly have to go now so bye

Love Always
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Brittney a.k.a. Nay-Nay......////
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The more I read this story, the more I feel Kagome losing control of herself. At this point, there is no going back. I wish she would stand up to her ignorant hateful sister. I want her to put that slut in her place. Kagome will have to live on campus, otherwise she will have no peace. She's playing with the big girls now so she's gonna have to become one if she wants her fredom and independence. I like her spunk.
person ladykaa28
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It started out happy in the beginning, but at the end you just wanted to cry for her. I just hope that the month will go by quickly so that they can get back together and work things out. I just know that Kikyo has somethings that she will try to make Kagome's life a living hell for the month he's gone.
person Laydhwk
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew!! I just read ALL 27 chapters!! I couldn't help myself!! I mean it! Absolutely NO work has been done tonight in this household by me! The boys did not get feed, the animals needed tending, homework to check - you get the idea...etc. - Lord only knows what they did end up eating - oh well!! - Anyway, I do digress, soooo, on with the review....I have enjoyed this story VERY much. You have a wonderful sense of timing, and keen talent for descriptive detail - (In short - you can write one hell of a Lemon(s) my friend!) - Yeah, here it comes the infamous, 'but' - Kagome speaks throughout this story in 'past tense', even the title suggest 'past' as in 'what once was'. Guess what I am trying to say here is I feel like I am waiting for the 'other shoe to drop' kinda of thing, ya know? Is this going to end badly? Has Kikyo (shudders at the mere thought!) been correct about Inu-Yasha all this time. Is he playing some kind of sick (albeit very highly & enjoyabley sexed) joke/game? If so," BAD INU!!!" OR, does he get hurt or worse (shudders again) die on his trip - Okay, okay!! I'll stop! Takes deep breath and composes self, and chants in calm voice, "I will patiently wait and see what the next chapter holds...." over and over.......
All in all - and however it turns out - I look forward to your next chapter. keep up the GREAT work!
person katrina
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That one part where inuyasha was whispering those things to kagome was from the movie armagedon right? I'm sure of it , anyway great story please update soon.
person shaina
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god that was sad! He better call her every minute of every day or i'm going to be mad at him. Loved the chapter. More soon please.
person Numisma
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm! loverboy hara indeed! i hope Kagome gets to go on tour with them sometime in the future!
person RavenShadow
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!! This is a really great story I have been hooked since the first chapter. It has almost become an obession with me. I really, really, really hope you update soon, I am so enjoying this!
person Queen
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still the best! Update soon. Please! Oh, is Inuyasha a demon?
person New Fan
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome. I hope that Inu be a good boy while he is away. I hope that Kagome will
survive the wrath of her mother. Soooo, when will Naraku makes his big entrance. Will he
be going after Kagome or will the Kikyo will surfice. Update soon.