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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Mitsue
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're a amazing writer, I love every one of your fics! "When he was mine" is one of the fics ever. Update soon (with a longer chapter, please).
person angelstars
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... ex turns up, acting all nice and not at all burned... is this going to be a good thing or a bad thing? He is just to umm...calm? He "asks" about Inuyasha and wants pictures??!!? Me thinks Kagome needs to watch herself... i for some reason have my doubts about the "bubbly ex" thing.

lol, i love this fic!
person inuyashasgurl2
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't matter if peps don't like lemons. They shouldn't be reading aff.net stories if they don't want to read lemons. tell them to go read ff.net. I love the story and i love lemons especially i/k lemons. the writing is good, the story is good, and you are great don't let ne one stop you from writing what you want to. I love ur story and it would be good without the lemon, but lemons add spice to your story. Keep up the good work and don't let any non-lemony persong yog you down............................
person Queen
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I just loved it! Please update soon. And can I please see a lemon with Inu/Kag.
person Queen
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I just loved it! Please update soon. And can I please see a lemon with Inu/Kag.
person Queen
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. I just loved it! Please update soon. And can I please see a lemon with Inu/Kag.
person Staind
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic! I've been reading since you've posted and I think it's pretty good! You should update a lot more! The anticipation of waiting kills me! So more! I need more!
person Soranji
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW I want to know what happenes next
person Esther
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhhh I can't wait for Inuyasha to get home to Kagome. I hope you'll be writing a real whoppie of a fluffy, waffy & hot reunion. Wowee I can't wait for the next chapter. U make every chappie so utterly romantic & hot . Yes HOT man !!! Am I glad that bitch Kikyou is out of the way. U know U should pair Kikyou up with Naraku. They both really (I mean really) make a good couple together. so please update (anxiously waiting).
person BRITTNEY
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!! I loved this chapter and the 6 friends too. But what do you have pland.I just hope her x-boyfriend dose not try anything.
Well i can't wright much but keep up the good work I was whating I mean 6 friends and I were whating for 3 to 4 day's to read it. And I loved ever bet of it and so.
Do the other 6 people I called. In the last 2 hour to come and and read it all together. And thay loved it and thay sad more more pleasssssssssssssssssssss. Well we well let you go....
Bye Nay-Nay and 6 Friend's..



The 6 friends and I loved it so much and we hope that thay's more and more, well we are going to let you go...
p.s. we all love happy ending's well well let you go bye ...... Nay-Nay and 6 friends...