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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person brittney
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!
I loved it. And my 6 friend's can't read the story intell 5:30 P.M. today it is Monday by the way. Thay have to get here at the same time and we all read it. Well I just want to tell you that you are doing a relly good job and keep up the good work. And me and I know that my 6 friens can't wat intell the next chapter... Keep up the good work. hope it ends in a happy ending.... well have to go H.W. before thay get here.

Bye Nay-Nay.....
person shaina
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the most wonderful reunion. I loved it so much. I can for more inuyasha and kagome togetherness. More soon please. P.s. it was an incredible lemon.
person Queen
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes he's back! I loved it as always. So please update soon and make it a little longer. please. Anyways your a great and I mean great writer.
person Kaye
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Inu may never disappoint, but neither do you. That was hot. Gotta love it. Excellent story. Love it!
person Tammy
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And YOU never dissapoint ME. I know this is an extremely hentai thing to say, but your lemons are the bomb. They just make me want to shout it from the rooftop....you are like Anais Nin on speed, baby!! I am lovin' this tale...especially the fact that Inuyasha sacks Kikyo. That ho had to go...I hate her!!! ( Isn't that mature ) I hope to see another update soon, and I am glad Inu is home...Yeah!!!
person PunkKagome
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I LOVE your story. It's so great.. you know.. I kind of feel like a hentai... aww fuck that.. I am a hentai! lol.. I reviewed your story on fanfiction.net.. I loved it there, and I had to come here and read everything else you havettentten here for this story. I CANNOT WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN!!! lol. anyways.. yeah.. ^_^ keep up the great work!

Ja~Ne,
Punkkagome
person inuyashasgurl2
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jealous little inuyasha.....muahahahaha....kikyo is a bitch......her mom picks favorites.....her dad acts like he's out of it....kagome is perfect and horny.....ahhhh perfect story.....lol....good story.....i do have a feeling that something bad is going to happen real soon....but hey that may be just a hunch(te he he)......your a good writer and are awesome at depicting the characters but where's sesshy at in this story...i think that he's the only one missing.........sexy sesshoumaru.......great story....great lemons....ahhh i have set here for the last two days in front of my p.c. reading this story.......just like kagome with inuyasha, i can't get enough of it.....update soon.....or sooner if possible.............i just wanna read......read......read.......read and read some more........................please update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person inuyashasgurl2
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo
person subaru
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better. I hope you put up more chapters! ^_^
person ladykaa28
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word...YAY!!!!!