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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Sheena
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!! IT DOES CONTINUE, RIGHT??????? BUT IT IS A WORK OF PERFECTION!!!!!! I ESPECIALLY LOVE THE INUYASHA AND KAGMOE LEMONS!!!! YOU ARE A VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY GOOD WRITTER!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!
person brittney and 6 friends
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!!
It's me Brittney and all 6 friend. We all whan to tell you that you are doing. A RELLY good job, the love sean. Well let's just say that thair is 2 girl's here with their boyfriend's, and thay are getting realy mad.lol. Because their girlfriend's are falling for InuYasha lol. Well not relly mad you you know. Ill give you the letter (G) lol. Well we want to tell you that you are doing a rell good job and that you wood make a relly good wrighter. Well we have toand and finish our school projuct. for our school exams well bye keep up the good work.

Bye: Brittney A.K.A. Nay-Nay
and 6 friends
p.s. we love happy ending's
p.s.s. how long is this story?lol well hope it get's longer...
person Kaye
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thi cou could live off of Inuyasha alone. Well maybe I'd have to sneak in water here and there but otherwise. Great chapter!! They are both really in need of one another are they not? Kagome needs him bad. Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Lots o' bonin'. *Grin* Your writing is fab.
person Carebear
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know for a second there I thought Kagome was gonna say, "How many licks does it take? 1...2...3..." *Inu: @_@* "...3." Haha. lol. Oh, I'm horrible. Turning a classic Tootsie Pop commercial into something perverted. Good chapter btw. I so love this story. I've been meaning to ask you about another of your fics that got deleted a while back. I was wondering if you planned on continuing it. I loved that one too. Oh geez! I forgot the name of it. Um... Please forgive me. I'm one of those people who are horrible with s, as, and it looks like this affliction extends itself to remembering the title of stories as well. Anyways, I do remember what it was about. It was an AU where Inuyasha and Kagome were being held captive in this government facility/prison, and Kikyo was there councilor/doctor. Kagome was chosen to be Inuyasha's mate, and the government wanted the two to produce strong children. , I\, I'm sure you know which one I'm talking about. It was a really good fic. My heart was going out to the two of them. I'd love to read more of it, but if "When He Was Mine" is the fic you'd rather concentrate on writing at the present time, then I'm more than content to keep reading it. And, I'll look forward to every update. But, I was just wondering if you plan on continuing the other fic, or if it has been discontinued. Well, keep up the great work!!! ^_^
person yasha21
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i still love the story, i widh you would answer my questions, but i suppose that if you want it to be suprise or something i could live. so keep writing, i can't wait to see what happens next.
person shaina
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww. How cute! I loved the lemons and I love the progression of the story(hopefully toward more lemons. ;-) Your such a wonderful author. More soon please.
person flyer_byer
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. For a musician who seems very aware of his good looks, Inu Yasha doesn't seem to have much self-confidence. I wonder if he has really fallen in love with Kagome the person, or if it's the power and lust that goes on between them.

Keep posting!
person koneko-neko
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my thoughts were to check this story out because i had already read everything else you have posted here,and i'll be damned if i didn't sit hee and read all 30 chapters in like 45 minutes. you are without equal and i am eagerly waiting on the next chapter. oh there was one other thing i was wondering if you are going to update Shape of my Heart anytime soon.because that one is my fave...sooooooomuch drama. anyway just thought i'd tell u that you kick ass!
person youkaimistress
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I ususally don't like first person point of view but you have done a wonderful job with it. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.