rate_review Reviews

Your fanfic was totally awesome!
I hope you right more like these!!!!

I really want to read and enjoy this story.. but I'm finding the typos and the repeated words very distracting. Things like ththeythey instead of they for example. Would you please take the story and edit it up a bit, clean up the typos and errors and repost it? It would probably get a great deal more attention if you did. Otherwise, I found the premise very interesting and really wanted to continue reading it.

Thank you.

Maggz...InuYasha has CHEST HAIR? Sorry...this just sorta disturbs me...lol. Anyway, love the story so far! Can't wait for the lemon....^^

I read this over two days. I must say you brought me to tears more
than once. It's been a very few rare times, that I've encountered an
'InuYasha' that was this heartfelt and beautiful. It was like i felt every
bit of his pain, anger and regret. My heart broke into a million pieces
when he cried during the sex on their last night. I cried with him...it
hurt just that much.

I practically dispised Kagome. I hated the way she constantly broke
his heart with her indecision and doubts - especially when it came to
his love for her. I found her to be weak & a waste of his time. Mind you,
this is no reflection on your writing. If anything, it proves that you're
brilliant because I adore Kagome most of the time & i can only see
her with InuYasha in fics. So to make me hate her like this...well done.

Are you british? I'm gathering that from the way you write. Anyway...
well done. I enjoyed this fic even though it was angsty and thank you for
finally making my love happy in the end. Kami knows he deserved it.

You had me worried there for a bit and it did seem like all InuYasha wanted Kagome for was the sex. But I think you handled the situation well, I only wish my marriage had gone so well as my husband was very controlling and frequently violent. I stuck it out for seven long months until he put me in the hospital and now am going through a very shitty divorce, He says he still loves me but I refuse to be his punching bag or his sex toy. I like how Kagome's dad stuck up for her when her shitty mom and Kikyo were being so cruel. You really hit home in a lot of places with this one girl and some parts even made me bawl like a baby. I love the ID bracelet thing and had the feeling that neither one of them would ever take theirs off. But that's enough of my ranting. I loved the story and look very forward to seeing more of your fine work. Thank you for a very entertaining, albeit three cold showers long, six hours.

Love Your work.

Rin in Red... "Oh Sesshoumaru-sama, what big... err... uhm that you have !!.
SS... "The better to *%#@ you my dear"
Rin in Red... "Eep"

i still think this is such a sweet story. i mean the relationship kinda seemed lustfull but in the end you could totally tell they loved each other. he didnt want her to leave cause he didnt want her to leave him. that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet. and the bracelet thing was so cute when they read it to each other. i still think that kagome should have had more lovers like inuyasha i mean just because he's famous doesnt mean she cant get that many too. j/k. it would have been weird if she did n-e-ways cause then she'd be considered a slut. n-e-ways i LOVED this story, without all the love scenes. i mean they made love like every night that they could. they didnt even spend one night just talking and sleeping. but i do have to say my heart went out to them in the last chapter. n-e-ways the story was awesome non the less. good luck with others. ^_^~buh byes

the ending was good.

you made kagome sound so stupid. no confidence ----cheap.

OMG!!!!!!!!!! I cannot believe I just found this story!!!!!! This was absolutely amazing! That was VERY, VERY painful to read!!!! Man, I don't know what I would have done if I was in their position...I REALLY couldn't imagine... EXCELENT PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!