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Chapter 10.

Ny: Oh my virgin eyes!

*Covers eyes*

::Mr. Disclaimer (Ny's muse) comes over and bops Ny upside the head::

Mr. Disclaimer: You 'ant no virgin!

Ny: Oh yeah! Well, it's just that, the lemon in this story was like... WOW. And I was like... OH! And ... and it just made me feel like a virgin again.....

Mr. Disclaimer: You need help.

Ny: Yeah, I know.
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Loved the lemon.

~Ny~

Chapter 11.

Another yummy lemon. Maggz you do love to indulge your readers in citrus don't you.
YaY!


~Ny~

Chapter 11.

Another yummy lemon. Maggz you do love to indulge your readers in citrus don't you.
YaY!


~Ny~

Damn..is it hot in here? I just reviewed your previous chapter not too long ago and boom..the next chapter was there. And I'm sweating and panting like crazy from reading it, Inu is one hot, sexy boy when he's mad.

Please, please update soon!

Oh my god oh my god! That was the best! Why the in the world did he stop? Please Please update soon. This is getting to good.

I did read this chapter on MediaMinor.org, but some of it got cut off. I can't believe InuYasha actually called Kagome a slut! I'm starting to hate him.

Oh, forgot to tell you that I find your story absolutely brill. Th.

Yay your story is amazing the first ten chapters where well lets say quite suspensefull since hm every author has theyre own way of getting them together but it looked like it was gonna end up a realy dark fic with all the things going in that direction of course it turned around and i think your story is great a real captivating story that i like also i was just wondering why do you give chapters titles... Peace

Ok. So I'm a little late in starting this story... But I finally got to start reading some storys on my 'To read' list in my 'FanFic' folder on aol. So far with only reading one chapter I can say that I like your writing style. You put alot into it.

I also want to tell you that I really do suck at writing reviews so alot of the till yll you will see is stupid babbling.

Altho I am very far behind the rest an I should try and read this alght ght away...I made that mistake when I tryed to catch up with another story. This one I am going to try and take my time. A few chapters each day. Not the hole story from 10pm till 9am the next morning like i did with the last one...lol

Also I don't know what sites you have this fic on and If you would rather I review on this site or another. Some people havere sre storys on multipul sites and some sites don't get as many reviews as other..so if there is a site that you would rather I review on PLEASE let me know.

Altho I will be reading it on AFF cause of the rateing because I am a perv.

NyliramLlessur@yahoo.com

Well thats all for now...lol I promise my other reviews wont be this long and boaring...they'll be short and boaring.

~Ny~

Chapter 22 I think that Kikyou needs to die in a firey car wreak...yeah! Kill the bitch!!