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Chapter 13.

Very nice shower scene.

Good lord woman... I need another ciggerett.

~Ny~

Chapter 13.

Very nice shower scene.

Good lord woman... I need another ciggerett.

~Ny~

Hey great story, please update asap. I hope that you fix your comp fast. Please, really wanna know what happenes next!! I hope to hear from you when you update. Try to update soon. I LOVE this story. I envy your ability to write. Well update soon!

Chapter 14.

What is up with AFF? Do they only work on one server? It is pissing me off so much. I have to refresh 50 times just to get to the next chapter and then like 10 times just to review..unrmunrmy reviews show up 2 or 3 times....God aff.net needs to get there act together or I think I might go POSTAL (hehehe love that word) on there @sses.


Any way.... another hot hot hot chapter.

~Ny~

Chapter 2.

Very nice. I like how Kag reacted to Inu and dancing with him. The conversation between the 2 was great. Very well writen. I am so tempted to read the next chapter right now but I know the more I read it the more I wont be able to stop and go to bed tonight. What to do ...What to do.....


~Ny~

Chapter 15.
WooHoo, Talk about 'Tree hugging hippies'. LOL ok that was a bad one.

~Ny~

Chapter 3.

Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another chapter.

I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."

But then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen self, You need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

S con conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

~Ny~

Chapter 3.

Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another chapter.

I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."
t tht then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen self, You need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

So in conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

~Ny~

Chapter 3.

Ok. So I didn't go to bed..I read another ter.ter.

I said to myself. "Self this is the last chapter then you must go to bed."

But then I replyed to myself. "But self this is so interesting..I want to know what happens."

Then my first self replyed back to my second self. "Listen selou nou need sleep, If you don't get sleep you get really weird, and you start writing reviews that don't make sence."

So my second self retorted to my first self. "But I don't care, a review is a review as long as it's not a flame, and I'm not going to flame this story cause I really like it."

So getting annoyed with my second self my first self yelled at my second self. "IF YOU DON'T GET SOME SLEEP YOU MIGHT START TO NOT UNDERSTAND THE STORY CAUSE THE SLEEPYNESS WILL EFFECT YOUR READING!"

That got my second self thinking. "Okay, you'er right. I do want to make sure I read this story correctly and understand it so, I will go to bed."

So in conclusion...All of me loves your story..but were going to bed.

~Ny~

Chapter 16

Oh god. I'm so torn on whether or not to believe him. God....

I'm so confused.

~Ny~