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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well over the last 5 chapters ill tell you that this story is pretty original but um yaa different... but i like it its cool and ill give you props for IMAGINATION big time hehehe but i think its lacking a little bit of humor to lighten the modd a bit like that realy funny sexual humor that you read about in other fics on AFF anyways i gotta compliment you on how fast you review makes your story all that much more fun to read Peace
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! double update! You rock!!
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I haven't been reviewing like i should but i am now, starting with this fic cuz its my fave(next to Innocent Begeinings that is :p)on this and any other fanfiction site. but enough rambling, the double update was fabulous as always and you are also still a genius. but on a side note whats up with Shape of my Heart?
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I haven't been reviewing like i should but i am now, starting with this fic cuz its my fave(next to Innocent Begeinings that is :p)on this and any other fanfiction site. but enough rambling, the double update was fabulous as always and you are also still a genius. but on a side note whats ith ith Shape of my Heart?
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so wonderful. I loved the lemon. I loved the way kagome and inuyasha speak to eachother lol. I can't wait for them to finally get all of their feelings out in the open so that their are no more secrets with eachother. I'm so happy right now. More soon please.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is kagome pregnant? she definatly acts that way
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O what happened there
Inuyasha is a bastard..! OMG and kagome what the hell.!!!!
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but I have a question.? when kagome and naraku we're dancing Kagome was also figthing I mean she didn't want to dance with him.?
did Inuyasha realize that..?
Inuyasha is a bastard..! OMG and kagome what the hell.!!!!
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but I have a question.? when kagome and naraku we're dancing Kagome was also figthing I mean she didn't want to dance with him.?
did Inuyasha realize that..?
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting it to get bad, but damn! He was COMPLETELY out of control. He wouldn't even listen to her side of things. At first I thought he was sweet in the beginning, but now I don't know. Things are definitely not looking good for my favorite couple. I can't wait for the next update!! Please, tell me that the man regains his sanity soon.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is like an orchard of lemons -got tons of good stuff along with a supporting plot and developed characters. :)
Speaking of characters, Inu is a piece of work. I like him in all his "me man, you girl, let's got to my cave and get horizontal" but calling Kagome a slut? Especially when* wa* was the one to buy the outfit, force her to wear it (without panties), and flaunt her around. He's like a little boy who wants to show off a new toy then gets mad at the toy for bringing attention to itself!
Please redeem him a bit...cuz right now I don\lamelame her for being extremely ticked and hurt.
Hmm...wouldn't it be cool to get Naraku and Kikyo together? hehehe
Congrats for your nomination to the Inuyasha fanguild awards...
Speaking of characters, Inu is a piece of work. I like him in all his "me man, you girl, let's got to my cave and get horizontal" but calling Kagome a slut? Especially when* wa* was the one to buy the outfit, force her to wear it (without panties), and flaunt her around. He's like a little boy who wants to show off a new toy then gets mad at the toy for bringing attention to itself!
Please redeem him a bit...cuz right now I don\lamelame her for being extremely ticked and hurt.
Hmm...wouldn't it be cool to get Naraku and Kikyo together? hehehe
Congrats for your nomination to the Inuyasha fanguild awards...
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12.
Still loving it. But Aff.net is being mean, and giving me a crap load of ... well of crap trying to load pages.
But I shall keep reading.
YOU HERE THAT AFF.NET? YOU SHALL NOT DEFEAT ME!
~Ny~
P.S There is no such thing as to many lemons.
Still loving it. But Aff.net is being mean, and giving me a crap load of ... well of crap trying to load pages.
But I shall keep reading.
YOU HERE THAT AFF.NET? YOU SHALL NOT DEFEAT ME!
~Ny~
P.S There is no such thing as to many lemons.