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Hey Maggz,

Boy that Kikyou is a MEGA-CUNT... No, I will not call her a bitch. I won't insult dogs that way.

But, it does make me wonder something... At the beginning of the fic, I thought Inuyasha was going to help Kagome become more independent and stronger. Instead I see her becoming a door mat.. He almost rapes her, for being in a situation he instigated.. ... but that's ok cause he loves her? But you know my reasons for feeling that way and I won't discuss them here. This chapter, Kikyou takes advantage of a distracted Inuyasha and asks him to dance in front of Kagome. Who then runs and hides in the bathroom like a whipped dog. A very nicely worded "I'm sorry Kikyou, Inuyasha promised to dance this dance with me." would have worked. Then when Kikyou comn ton to the bathroom she tucks her tail between her legs and runs away.

I just don't like seeing women being doormats... which Kagome in this story is. She allowed her Sister and Mother to brow beat and knock her all her life. When she finally got into a relationship that MIGHT strengthen her... she continued to allow Sis and Mom to down her. She FINALLY starts to show some back bone and lets boyfriend control her. Now Sis is at it again. Instead of at the very least confronting Inuyasha about Kikyou's statement he wanted to break up with her, Kagome rolled over and took it.

Since you told me once upon a time I'll love the way the story ends... I hope you are right... Because right now I'm not thrilled about the direction it's taking. I'm not saying the story isn't well written, it is. Please realize that all these comments are my personal opinions and possibly even a minority opinion at that.

please don't let him leave without talking to kagome face to face. That would be so horrible. More soon please.

Please kill Kikyou. I don't how but please do it now !! That bitch!!!!! I absolutely HATE HER!!! Man! I love yr story. I've following & waiting for next chapters every time I finished one. Please tell me that its gonna be a Inuyasha and Kagome happy ending. Oh U can boil Kikyou. Ok now please update pretty soon.

Grrr....damn that Kikyo! What a bitch! I hope Kagome gets her back for that pile of crap she said. Poor Inu he's worried about Kag. Will he find her at Sango's or is he going to have to wait until morning and see if she comes home? *waits patiently for next chap to see what happens*

See you later;
Khell

chapter 40: OMG! I still think Kikyou needs to die in a firey car wreak

Kikyo was evil. And Kouga just helped... *slaps Kouga* he's an idiot. Great chapter. Though I wonder if Kagome will say good bye or will Inuyasha have to start stalking her. Whatever great chapter!

Hey!!!!
I loved it so much.. Up date soon....

Nay-Nay......

Hey

Omg Your story is so good......like everytime i think about Kikyou i DISPISE her for everything
she is doing to Kagome in this story...in chapter 40 by the end of it i was crying behond sad like
it was so sad...you are such a good writter....PLZ plz make more and make them as long as
chapters 40 and 39.......good i wish i was as good at writting storys as you....I LOVE

Pooor Kagome. She is letting her imagination run wild. She needs to stand up against her sister. I believe that Inuyasha loves her and they both will lose each other if they do not stand together. Update soon.

hmm Sadly as much as I live this story, i think i wanted Kagome and Kouga to be together more. Inuyasha seems like a nice guy but if he is trying to prove her loves Kagome, he can't tell her he loves her and it not about sex then have sex with her. Atleast Kouga took her out and had fun with her with no sexy involved. Inuyasha just took her out to have sex with her.