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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Queen
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi me again. Wanted to know if you were going to do a part two?
person Queen
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi me again. Wanted to know if you were going to do a part two?
person Stephanie
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Your writing style is exqusite and you keep your audience hanging on with every word. You should be writing novels. < 3
person New Fan
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why do I have the feeling the Inuyasha will ask Kagome to marry him. If he is then he should do it in Hawaii. If not, maybe at one of his concerts
at home. Udpate soon on this story and your others.
person New Fan
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope the Inuyasha ask Kagome to marry him. If not in Hawaii when he returns home from his
tour. I hope that you update this story as well as your others soon.
person smittin kittin
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow another great chap. I can't believe it's almost over! I'm getting scared the end will be tragic, can't say why just feels that way like she's telling the story of her lost love. I'll be keeping a tissue nearby just incase. Your story is amazing & I'm anciously awating the next update! Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
person shaina
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love their romantic moments together. They are sooo sweet and wonderful together. More soon please.
person venatus_fraus
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fuck! I'm so nervous!!! What's going to go wrong? Will they be together? The title of this has always made me really anxious, since the story is from Kagome's pov...........Kyaaaa!

*deep breath* It's only a story, it's only a story, it's only a story, it's only a story..................
person Inulover
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a really good fic and keep it up.. and you better not kil Inu Yasha or Kagome that jsut mean.. I don't know why but I get the feeling that is where this fic is going .. you can't tho that jsut mean
person inu-fanforever
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man, kikyo is one hateful chick...I hope kagome sees that kikyo is just jealous of her, and she makes it right with inuyasha again.