rate_review Reviews

i love it you rock you could make a lot of money if you charged people to read it i wold pay $50.00 for this in a book.

Ok, first off I have to tell you this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I know I haven't reviewed before, and believe me its not because of lack of intrest. I look forward to each and every update since the first chapter. It has been my own laziness and lack of time. I try to read as much fanfic as i can but sometimes that causes me to let some things fall to the way side. But i really love this story, it is captivating and well written. Sometimes you read fics that where the intimate moments between char, are poorly done. I have never been unsatified by anything you have written so far. I wait in anticipation for the next chapter. This is truely a great story, by a truely talented writer. Thank you for allowing us fans the pleasure of your vision.

Wow Magz, another amazing chap! I think this chap really displaytherther aspects of their relationship. I felt it was rather poinant when Inu said he liked to play w/Kag. I hadn't considered that he wouldn't get the chance to do that often. You've done an excellant job of showing Inu vulnerability. Now here is my big fear! Kag has given in to her love for him completly! She's admitted it to him! She's secure in it! The shoe is t tot to drop isn't it? I'm almost afraid to read the next chap. This story is written in the past tense & as I've said before I get the impression from the way she tells it that something tragic happened. Not just because it's told in the past tense , but the tone of the story from the very begnning has been underlined w/saddness. Regardless I'm in this thing till the end! Once again great work! Anxious Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin

very good lemon, I loved it. More soon please.

I've been enjoying your writing for so many chapters now, I thought that I'd take a stab at reviewing while AFF.net is letting me.
I can sense some unhappiness coming up -as much as I really, really want everything to work out between Inu and Kag (I always root for that couple in all stories) - I think the way you have Kagome's wistful narration in past tense is the clue.

And now I'm getting anxious about just how things do end...I mean they both love each other so much -Kag has had to overcome a great internal struggle to admit her feelings for Inu. As rocky and as sex driven as the relationship is between the two of them, the genuine need and love for one another comes across. The only way I can see things ending that will not leave us hating Inu for breaking Kag's heart is if some external forces separates them....illness or accident.

I've already shed a few tears while reading through your chapters (testament to your believable writing and likable characters) and am guessing that I'll be shedding more with the remaining ones.

I anxiously await your updates with my kleenex....

Just keep getting better and better. Is Inyasha going to ask Kagome to marry him? Well please update soon.

sounds like Inu and Kagome are having a wonderful time visiting the beach....wonder how Kikyo will act when she finds out......

This story is amazing. Pleeeeeeez post again soon. I have to know what happens. The little beach cottage is a fairytale, great idea. That was soooooooo romantic!

Chapter 41&42
I love it Maggz! Great chapters.

great job on this chapter didnt see that coming but hmm i wonder what kagome's present was.....