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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've just read the first ch and its fantastic!!!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
breathtaking!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow talk about dirty talk!! lol i really never got that 0.0 lol neways loved the lemons!!!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know i've never thought i could like dirty talk...but there is something so sexy about the way you write it that omg! it so fucking hott!!! it goes so well especially with all that angry sex!!! oh and by the way screw the wankers that don't like lemons!!!! bc this is aff!! adult! fanfics got a problem maybe your in the wrong place ne? lol love the fic and the lemons !!!! weee!!i could so make lemonade right now!
person iggy
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to say that I read your story while you were first posting, and every once in a while when I feel like it, I read it again, and this time there were so many thought that i had about it. I kept thinking about how sometimes Inuyasha seemed like an ass, he just lost control so much and it seemed like he had no control over his emotions and I didn't like him much for that fact. However as I read more and read the story again, I realized that he was just scared, because he cried, over Kagome, and over losing her- he didn't seem scared to show that. It made me realize that your portrayl of Inuyasha was amazing, because he could show what he felt, and was an intense person.

I just wanted to tell you that, I thought that it was something that I needed to say.

I am glad you wrote this.
person Kat
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*
I used to read this story when it was originally on FanFiction, I read it from beggining to end, I always hoped you'd write a sequal, But it seems you haven't.
:(
I really hope you do, It was a great ending, And I don't know what you could write if you did do a sequal...I guess it's just wishful thinking because it was so good.
Well anyway, I'll read your other stories.
:)
Kat.
person Ryuchi
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsom and you seem like a asome person and that story was... Just... GREAT!! I'm speachless...
person Sakura
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man i already read this story, but i loved it so much i had to read it again, like an old book ya know. I"m really hopin for a sequal though, haha im kinda embarressed cause i already asked you this on FF.net, tells you how much i love this fic. How detailed it is about everything, their thoughts and actions, you really got a talent for writing. :)
person ~ME
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just re-reading this story--again!! -- this is one of my all time favorites!-- and just had to let you know that you are the absolute MASTER of all lemons!! I just can't get over how wonderful you are--just the feelings, descriptions--everything--makes an incredibly great read ^_~ I was hoping you'd, maybe, write another 'strickly Inu/Kag' fic again? I'm an Inu/Kag 'only and forever' kinda gal--just a sappy romantic, I guess :) and there seem to be so few well-written Inu/Kag fics out there lately. Anyway--felt I needed to drop you another line on how fantastic I think you're writing skills are, and to just say 'thanks'.
person amber
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY this is such a good story but check ur spelling more ok?