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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far.Keep up the good work.Oh and pleaes update soon.
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February 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
yeah! An awesome story with a good ending! I've read countless fics where it's an awesome story line etc. but then the ending made no sense!! This one made perfect sense and it made everyone happy. Awesome Awesome. Good job, you should be proud of yourself!
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February 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Loved the family scene and the fact that the Z fighters still popped up and interacted with the Saiyans...err, can't understand why Yamcha doesn't pop by though...LOL! Poor guy, I'm still remembering the "My eyes\ne :ne :-)
"“Our sex life is not your concern,” Vegeta said."
"Which, of course, was the same as jumping up and down and shouting ‘Kami YES I NEED TO GET LAID.’"
LOL! Poor Vegeta, he's so transparent at times...I just want to give him a huge squeezy hug :-)
Oh, poor Bulla...shame that she may be infertile. Kind of ironic that the only female Saiyan is the one that can't get pregnant.
Love the idea that not only does Goku pick up the kids by the tail and give them a kiss, but that Vegeta ruffles their hair in a ritual goodnight. Sweet :-)
Thoroughly enjoyed the lemon. Poor ol' Vegeta was feeling all loving and tender though and Goku was just feeling hot and botd, ld, loved how Vegeta wasn't allowed to just stare...Goku wanted action. LOL!
Simply adored the fact that Vegeta brushed his teeth with Bulla so that she won't be alone :-)
A wonderful ending! A wonderful story...thank-you for sharing this world with us :-)
Thankfully, I can still see these folks in Frosting Chronicles, so all is not lost :-)
"...Because most of the time I’m only one chapter ahead in all these stories you’re reading.)"
This shows your confidence and natural talent as a writer, which unfortunately, I lack in l qua quantities. I'm amazed with your ability to type out four different chapters on a daily basis, when I can go days before I sit down and tap out some more of my stuff.
I rea a w a writing magazine once...that an author should spend at least one hour a day writing, even if they have to force themselves to do it...I think the article had something to do with writers block or something...can't remember, it was a long time ago and I was waiting to see the doctor, but it sort of made sense to me. Unfortunately, when I attempted to apply this method just recently, and read back what I wrote, the next day, I was bored shitless with what I wrote and had to scrap the whole thing.
"But, if & when you post the stories, I would very much like to read them."
Thank-you :-) I would like you to read them as well, although I would be a bit nervous at the same time. :-)
"“Our sex life is not your concern,” Vegeta said."
"Which, of course, was the same as jumping up and down and shouting ‘Kami YES I NEED TO GET LAID.’"
LOL! Poor Vegeta, he's so transparent at times...I just want to give him a huge squeezy hug :-)
Oh, poor Bulla...shame that she may be infertile. Kind of ironic that the only female Saiyan is the one that can't get pregnant.
Love the idea that not only does Goku pick up the kids by the tail and give them a kiss, but that Vegeta ruffles their hair in a ritual goodnight. Sweet :-)
Thoroughly enjoyed the lemon. Poor ol' Vegeta was feeling all loving and tender though and Goku was just feeling hot and botd, ld, loved how Vegeta wasn't allowed to just stare...Goku wanted action. LOL!
Simply adored the fact that Vegeta brushed his teeth with Bulla so that she won't be alone :-)
A wonderful ending! A wonderful story...thank-you for sharing this world with us :-)
Thankfully, I can still see these folks in Frosting Chronicles, so all is not lost :-)
"...Because most of the time I’m only one chapter ahead in all these stories you’re reading.)"
This shows your confidence and natural talent as a writer, which unfortunately, I lack in l qua quantities. I'm amazed with your ability to type out four different chapters on a daily basis, when I can go days before I sit down and tap out some more of my stuff.
I rea a w a writing magazine once...that an author should spend at least one hour a day writing, even if they have to force themselves to do it...I think the article had something to do with writers block or something...can't remember, it was a long time ago and I was waiting to see the doctor, but it sort of made sense to me. Unfortunately, when I attempted to apply this method just recently, and read back what I wrote, the next day, I was bored shitless with what I wrote and had to scrap the whole thing.
"But, if & when you post the stories, I would very much like to read them."
Thank-you :-) I would like you to read them as well, although I would be a bit nervous at the same time. :-)
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February 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Beautifully written, the characters are all very true to form and the story flows well, it's very easy to read. Love the plot too. I love Snape and Lucius and I hope you continue. Bravo. Shelly
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February 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! Very descriptive and drama filled chapter, and sexy to boot. But poor Filia. I felt real bad for her, so nicely done. Valgaav can be a right awful bastard when he wants to be and manipulating Filia was up there for bad behavior. Nice portryals. I love all your stories!!