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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was romantic buuut I want a goood lemon
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so good. I knew that there had to be something up with Inuyasha fim tim to have done what he did. And I hope you're going where I think you're going with Hiei and Sango. They would make a great couple. And how funny to watch them get together with Sango's strong personality, going toe to toe with Hiei. Could be a great side story. I hope we have a happy ending of some sort for Inuyasha. Can't wait for the next chapters.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is going on my recomended readings, now just to find where in the world to put it.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was enjoying the story but theout of character portrayals of Hiei and Kuwabara ruined it.
On Hiei=
Although Hiei and Kuwabara do not get along, they only argue. They never get physical between them, merely exchange words and threats. It's Kuwabara and Ysuke that get into physical fights and hitting each other on the head.
On Kazuma Kuwabara=
Kuwabara is not as stupid as you make him out to be. Hefigured out that the masked fighter was Genkai while they were still on the boat. In the movie, he was the first one to defeat one of the demon gods. Kuwabara did that by tricking Majari into spending all his spirit energy in one attack. And that was in the first encounter. Kurama, Hiei and Yusue were defeated by the demon gods in the first encounter andn'dn't kill them until later.
Kuwabara DOES know how to keep a secret, he knew about Yusuke's spirit trial when Yusuke was suppose to dead. He never told people about the Reikai and such matters.
Also Kagome would not call her cousin by his family name, Kuwabara. Even if she did not like him, she would still call her cousin by his personal name, Kazuma.
It seems tht you pesonally don't like Kazuma Kuwabara and it shows in this story by the senseless Kuwabara-bashing that unfortunatly has ruined a good plot.
On Hiei=
Although Hiei and Kuwabara do not get along, they only argue. They never get physical between them, merely exchange words and threats. It's Kuwabara and Ysuke that get into physical fights and hitting each other on the head.
On Kazuma Kuwabara=
Kuwabara is not as stupid as you make him out to be. Hefigured out that the masked fighter was Genkai while they were still on the boat. In the movie, he was the first one to defeat one of the demon gods. Kuwabara did that by tricking Majari into spending all his spirit energy in one attack. And that was in the first encounter. Kurama, Hiei and Yusue were defeated by the demon gods in the first encounter andn'dn't kill them until later.
Kuwabara DOES know how to keep a secret, he knew about Yusuke's spirit trial when Yusuke was suppose to dead. He never told people about the Reikai and such matters.
Also Kagome would not call her cousin by his family name, Kuwabara. Even if she did not like him, she would still call her cousin by his personal name, Kazuma.
It seems tht you pesonally don't like Kazuma Kuwabara and it shows in this story by the senseless Kuwabara-bashing that unfortunatly has ruined a good plot.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanx for updatein' so soon. (as u may or may not notice im a lil less hyper than b4 lol) i like the way the sly lil fox thinks =^_______^= although kurama and kagome r prob. thinkin' kno or will soon find out. oh well i will always luv shippo. plz update soon, this chappy was juss as awesum as the other! keep the dream alive =-____-=v
ryoko-chan =^_____________~=
ryoko-chan =^_____________~=
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD!!!! LET ME IN ON THIS PLAN OF YOURS SHIPPO!!!!!!!
*Ckears throat* Srry, hyper active
*Ckears throat* Srry, hyper active
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. I think I missed how Kikyo can still be alive after 500 years. She's a miko but she's still human, right? Anyway, Kag needs to kick the crap out of Kikyo once and for all, and Kurama, better yet yoko, needs to beat the dog crap out of Inuyasha. Sweet Shippo making his plans to hook up Kag and Kurama, don't think they'll need the help, but won't it be fun to see what the plan is. Great chapters. Hurry with more.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is really good! Please update soon! I really really want to read more!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE NEW NOW NOW
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
exscuse me, Spiritraven, What is your pen pal name on FF.net? i want to read this one there to see if it's good. please e-mail me or just tell mriagriagatou