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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo nice very nice but could have been longer and please make more of them together
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FANFICTION!!!!!!!!!! IT'S DA BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*DANCES AND DRINKS* YEAH!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo this is soooo good please make more
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...All those chapters up in a couple of days...I guess Vegeta's heart heard my plea.....YES!!!!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue with eth story, i'm looking foward to the next chapter.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still wonderful. keep 'em comein'. juss cant seem t' get enough. nice lil twists. write more, then i'll read more. 1 last question; lem or no lem? oh well i'll find out sooner or later. next chappy soon plz.
ryoko-chan =^______^=
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ryoko-chan =^______^=
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 is nice except one big problem= When Kagome was thinking about the rose petals and romance and who may have left them; she thought of all guys and why they wern't the ones to leave them, INCLUDING Kazuma Kuwabara, her cousin. Why would she think of her own cousin like that?
It would have been better if you wrote that Kuwabara could not have left them since he was her cousin.
It would have been better if you wrote that Kuwabara could not have left them since he was her cousin.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chaps. some greamer eorrers, but over all they where great. I am likeing the pairings you are comeing up with, that is if I have figerd them out correatly. lol Well any ways, up date soon. Can't wait for the next chap. Ja ne! ^^
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol!!!!!!!! i like hiei, he's cool, calmcalm. my persinality is like his.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes!!!!! That was fast!!! i love this story.........I love foxes as well......i resuced one from death!