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I am begging you to write a new chapter... PLEASE i am dying to find out what happens!! but other whys i am like totally in love with your story. good plot. great mix of charecters.is tis the best..

i hope you finish spirit of the fox i just have to find out about heia and songo thanks by

Spiritraven,you'r an absolute geniuos. I think that Kurama and Kagome make the best coupSweeSweet and caring fox meets lovely and couragous miko.Absolutely perfect plot and intriguing story line .So please write more chapters.I would really appreciate it. Also try to complete your super awsotorytory. You did a great job Spiritraven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ooo nice

omgsh! i love this ficcie! ^^ gah.. it's great! =] i just luve the kurama/kagome... i love kurama.. ^^

but about this...

"This demon was more beautiful then both Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha." -chap 2
"But Kagome wasn't fooled, she knew Kurama couldveryvery deadly even more so then Sesshoumaru." -some other chap..??

i resent that! sesshoumaru is waaaay better than kurama! yes, i love that hott kitsune, but ... sesshoumaru is hella better! ^^ he's better looking AND deadly.. teehee!

oh and pleeeeeze don't make sesshoumaru end up with shizuru! .. i don't mind her, i just.. don't want anyone paired up with him ... [[besides kagome.. i love sess/kag!]] i really really don't want to see him end up with her...

update soon! ^^ =] =D i luve this ficcie!

Ied ted the chapter. I hope your hand is better so you can type more chapters. This is a really good story.

I loved this story!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just read ch1-13
u did a great job writing it
and the lemon was better then
what i can write so don't worry
;)

I love the way you've brought other characters into the story. Jin and Touya, Chu and Rinku, how fun. The only people you're missing are Miroku and Koga. Bring them too for the fight. Inu really needs to get over himself at this point about Kag. And Sess is right about Inu's ego over what he missed out on and can't have now. The lemon was rushed through, but that's to be expected considering it was your first. So I think you did a really job with it. The more you write them the more you'll be comfortable with adding more details, descriptiond snd sound effects. I'm really enjoying this fic so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Hiei and Sango good pair. Shizuru and Sess good pair. How about Jin and Kagura, they have alot in common. Looking forward to more chapters.

Really great.
You did a wonderful job.
Please update soon.