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PLZ UPDATE SOON LUV WHERE THIS IS GOIN'!!!
ryoko-chan =^_______________^=

This just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the great work :D

Well I might be able to help with this as long as some else hasn't already thought of it. but you could just make it an averageklacklace like the ones Inuyasha and Koga have, but only prettier. It could be activated by a word or an action that she won't even notice them saying or doing. Of course this couldays ays backfire on them if they use it to much on aciddent but its more for for us then. So just tell be what you think and if you don't use it no hard feelings. I has just try to help. Plus I bet there are alot more better ideas out there.

Very hot. I like that Koga can be sat too. And it's about time that Kagome get a taste of her own medicine with a subduing spell. I think that the subduing spell on her should automatically give her that special, overwhelming tingling feeling between her legs. So much so that it will take both of them to satisfy her. As far as the subduing word, maybe since you have 'sit' for Inu, 'heel' for Koga, how about 'come' for Kagome, which stays in line with the dog commands (and has that double meaning, hehe). Good luck. Don't forget a good threesome, after Inuyasha gets his time with Kagome.

She gets pray beads and the spell can be bitch cause she is one to Inu & Kouga. Just a thought nice pwp story to much OOC for me.

i hope the inu/kag one comes soon. Inu is defiently better than kouga, in ALL aspects

Whoo-hoo! I've got a soft spot for Kouga x Inu x Kagome pairings. So, Kouga and Kagome had some "alone time", I assume Inu and Kagome will too. Any chance of a Kouga x Inu incident? Oh, and as for Kagome's subduing spell...what else could the command be but "come"? heehee

I understand that this was going to be a one-shot and you decide to make it more but I got a couple questions first off doesn't Kouga have a tribe to take care of? and if he does he can't take Kagome & Inuyasha cause their serching for jewel shards?, What about Naraku & Kikyo? hopefully you will be able to address these issues later As for right now I Guess I will call it a GREAT PWP cause that what it is.

Chirella,

I think that I might have an idea for Kagome's subduing spell! You could have hers be "Come!" I'll let you interpret that howeyou you like though. Oh, and keep up the good work! This is a great fanfic! Give your muse a hug and a kiss for me!

Ja Ne
Sentinel

ooo such a good idea to make this a story