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for I want to be with you

by Atropa

person ladykaa28
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it should be in a place that is very secluded. With a water fall on one side and a hot spring on the other side. They could meet in the middle so that the water was warm. Almost like a large outdoor bathtub. there could be a hut with a few rooms. a place that may have belonged to a rich person, but Sess found it one day and had it fixed up just incase he would find a mate. I guess it could be enchanted to where it would only left in Sango and Sess. Or any one that they invited in. It would have to be close to his castle or whatever he lives in, but far enough away that they would have some privacy.
person Shinna
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Sango will react when she finds Sesshoumaru sleeping next to her. update soon
person Utena the Black Rose
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I love your stories, please update soon!
person Candace
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice bath scene. I love the plot twist with Sango leaving its really going to spice things up when Sesshomaru has to look for her.
person nightfall2525
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when i got to the end i was Crying. To have Sango leave Sesshomaru, all i can say is that i am crying and can't what for the next part.
person nightfall2525
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Need more can't wnat for to long. You one of the best writers in this AFF.n and I for one can't what for the next one and what ever new ones you write.
person Shinna
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to reading the next chapters. update soon
person Shinna
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And later he shall proceed, update soon
person Candace
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the hot spring scene in this. I really like hou shu show the thoughts of the characters too it really adds to the story. Your Sango/ Sesshomaru stories raock.
person KagoKitty
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nicely done, atropa-sama. Looks like Sango and Fluffy'll be getting a little 'boom boom' time together soon!! *giggle*
please update soon!!
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