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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very good story you got here. I just lovod Iod Inuyasha & Kagome stories. Well I hope you post more soon of this!!!
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.... good chapter. Just to let you know, Kagome's eyes are like a bluish gray color... and her moods kinda lean towards one or the other, you know. For a lemon... make them blue... for happiness... :P. Anyways, keep it it, I'm loving this story!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love Kagome & Inuyasha Angst stories they are such a great couple to write about. Well I hope you post more of this soon!!!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! *points to the wet kleenxes by the keyboard* They're both so miserable without the other. And in my head, I can just hear his howl.... so sad! You make the stories really convincing... great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...that's so sad...*sniff* You know, when I read the part about Kagome finding Inuyasit wit was just like I was watching, third-person--the description was great. Illy lly like your story so far =) I hope you keep going with this as well as you have! I do have one little criticism, though: you keep mixing your tenses, switching from past to present. It'd make your writing tighter if you picked one and stuck with it. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... it's so sad! But hey, it's really good. Keep going with it!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhccckkk you cant leave it like that! snifffles I want more please write more soon please?? pretty please??? this was a good first chap and had me thinking and wanting to find out what the heck is going on and what will happen and soo forth I really like this so I really hope you update and soon..:-) ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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February 18, 1920 at 12:00 AM
i have been throughly enjoying your story so far and i look forward to the next chapter. I love the scenes between Inu Yasha and Kagome.
Thier passion in both thier love and thier fights is fun to watch.
Thier passion in both thier love and thier fights is fun to watch.