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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person ReiHino
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was so sweet! Inuyasha definately deserved to get sat... hehe. Oh, and another little reminder... you hit 1000 today! *pats on the back* Good for you! You deserve it! Anyways... keep up the good work, and I'll be here to review it till the end! :)
person catesy
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Kagome still didn’t get her bath. Lol good chapter.
person Ickabod119
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the way you write you could balance both Drama & Humor But now I think you have to make Inuyasha suffer some more like have Kouga show up and there is nothing like a jealousy puppy with insecurities issues with himself. I can't wait until you post more of this soon!!!
person Ickabod119
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think Inuyasha had a smart side to him. I can't wait to see what else you plan to bring to your story. I can't wait until you post moreof this story soon and Excellent Lemons!!!
person KagoKitty
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story!! its so cute!! I think you should keep the plot serious like the first chapters, but put in a lil' dash of fun every now and then. ya know...like the actual inuyasha story (duh)!!
once again, i LOVED your story and plot, and i hope after such a great lemon and an adorable morning after, you can keep this fic rollin'!!
toodles,
=^-.~^=
person catesy
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You deserve more reviews than what you get. I think this story is great and hope you continue.

p.s I think you deserve reviews so much that I joined just to leave you one. and I don’t even have any lemons to post.
person ReiHino
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... that was nice. I see that Kagome still needs time to adjust a little... but I know she loves the hanyou... :) Glad you like my reviews... I like putting them. By the way... you were over 700 hits when I read the chapter... good for you! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter... Sayonara!
person LilithQueen
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sooo lemony sweet!I love it!!Please keep them coming!!SLURPPP!!!^_^
person dokushoka
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! your story is the first "lemon" inu yasha fanfic i've ever read and i really like it! ^_^ (uhm...can you tell me what a "lemon" is?) i liked how you started out your story. it was great build up to the love scenes ^_^v i hope to read more of your stories. great job! ^_^
person ReiHino
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was a good lemon. I even liked how you split it... it made me want to finish! So yay... they're together now... how's everyone gonna take it? What's going to happen to them now? Keep writing... and I'll keep reviewing! :-)

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