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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... *more tissues sitting by the keyboard* That was just amazing! So emotional... and having Inuyasha cry... wow. I can't think of anything else to say there. You are just one heck of a writer... and I feel honored to be reading such a great fan fic. Keep it up... I'll be looking for updates!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg you have my Inu baby crying again...and sniffles me toooooooo...awwwwwwwwww...they are both happy yet sad and there seems no out...dammit let Kikyo die..set Inu free or something please??? please?? lol..they have to be together they have to be happy...sniffles..that was another wonderfull chapter and yes this time I kept my eye out, didnt want anymore updates sneaking up on me without my knowing..*still looks around in confussion* still havent figured out how I missed sooo much...grrrrrrrrr..but now more love this fic ty ty ty for the update till next one you be safe well and good much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing Absolutely Amazing!!! I have only seen a few wirters who can capture the true bond and Love that Inuyasha & Kagome share and you are one of them. I glad that you blessed us with your writing and the Amzing story you have here. I will try and review everytime and this storygoingoing in recommend reading please post more soon!!!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did have tears in my eyes. This was so heart-wrenching, but their words weery ery abo about their future. However, I think we need to kill off Kikyo so Inuyasha won't have to go to hell with her, releasing him from his promise. You have to eventually give us a happy ending. This story screams for a happy ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww...don't be discouraged by your japanese...at least you knew what the hell it meant!! *sigh* i'm so lost...
lol...hope you update really soon because this story is so angsty and beautiful!!
toodles,
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lol...hope you update really soon because this story is so angsty and beautiful!!
toodles,
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, an apology for taking so damn long to reveiw. I haven't been able to read the current fics for a few days, so I just saw this one tonight! GOMEN!
To be honest, I'm only on the third chapter, and already, I just have to say "WOW"
You've done it again!
I'm blown away. It's so intense, and I was crying at the end of the second chapter. HOW SAD!!
But also how believable! That's always been a big thing for me. I can't fully enjoy a fic it the characters don't react like a normal person would...or hanyou for that matter.
Okay thade ade a lot more sense in my head...
Anywho, the point is, I'm excited to see what the next few chapters havestorstore! What is Kagome dreaming about? GRRR!! Must read! Must know!!!
I'll review again, but just had to say first, that you've done a great job!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
To be honest, I'm only on the third chapter, and already, I just have to say "WOW"
You've done it again!
I'm blown away. It's so intense, and I was crying at the end of the second chapter. HOW SAD!!
But also how believable! That's always been a big thing for me. I can't fully enjoy a fic it the characters don't react like a normal person would...or hanyou for that matter.
Okay thade ade a lot more sense in my head...
Anywho, the point is, I'm excited to see what the next few chapters havestorstore! What is Kagome dreaming about? GRRR!! Must read! Must know!!!
I'll review again, but just had to say first, that you've done a great job!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Sabichan loves good lemons!
And this was one of 'em! Very sweet, yet sexy at the same time! You did a great job, and I thought it was so cute how shy she was the morning after! KAWAIIIII!!!
Great detail, VERY vivid, and did I mention hot? No?
Well it was HOT!
WWOOOOOWWEEEEEE!!
Anywho!
wow. it's fics like this that made me want to start posting in the first place. It's awesome, I love it, and I'm so excited to read some more!
Really curious what happens with the dream, what about Kikyo? Boy, she's not gonna like this is she?
TE HE!
by the way, are Kagome's eyes really blue? Seriously, I have up to episode 136, and they've always looked brown to me...*shurgs* I think she'd look super cute withe eye eyes though! Bluish gray, even better, very mysterious. Wish my eyes were blue (mine are brown by way)way)
Anyways, less about my eyes, more about your great fic!
I'm crossing my fingers that we'll get another lemon, but no pressure! This one was more than satisfying. May I suggest, for futher humor, using more Miroku. I've learned that he's one of the anime/mans mas main sources of comedy, and well....makes sense huh? I know it's kinda hard to try writing the supporting characters-there's just not that same bond as Inu and Kagome have. Theirs is so obvious and strong, while Miro and Sango are only getting started.
I have no idea what I'm writing about now, it's four am, and I have to work in....four hours...what a co-inky-dink, ne?
But I had to read and drop a review for this first, I wouldn't be able to sleep otherwise. Can't believe it took me so long to see it!
Once again, Awesome Job, Awesome Lemon!
Thanks for writing sweetheart!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
(i think i just broke Carrie's record for longest rambling review.)
Sabichan loves good lemons!
And this was one of 'em! Very sweet, yet sexy at the same time! You did a great job, and I thought it was so cute how shy she was the morning after! KAWAIIIII!!!
Great detail, VERY vivid, and did I mention hot? No?
Well it was HOT!
WWOOOOOWWEEEEEE!!
Anywho!
wow. it's fics like this that made me want to start posting in the first place. It's awesome, I love it, and I'm so excited to read some more!
Really curious what happens with the dream, what about Kikyo? Boy, she's not gonna like this is she?
TE HE!
by the way, are Kagome's eyes really blue? Seriously, I have up to episode 136, and they've always looked brown to me...*shurgs* I think she'd look super cute withe eye eyes though! Bluish gray, even better, very mysterious. Wish my eyes were blue (mine are brown by way)way)
Anyways, less about my eyes, more about your great fic!
I'm crossing my fingers that we'll get another lemon, but no pressure! This one was more than satisfying. May I suggest, for futher humor, using more Miroku. I've learned that he's one of the anime/mans mas main sources of comedy, and well....makes sense huh? I know it's kinda hard to try writing the supporting characters-there's just not that same bond as Inu and Kagome have. Theirs is so obvious and strong, while Miro and Sango are only getting started.
I have no idea what I'm writing about now, it's four am, and I have to work in....four hours...what a co-inky-dink, ne?
But I had to read and drop a review for this first, I wouldn't be able to sleep otherwise. Can't believe it took me so long to see it!
Once again, Awesome Job, Awesome Lemon!
Thanks for writing sweetheart!
Ja ne!
~Sabichan~
(i think i just broke Carrie's record for longest rambling review.)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I strongly believe that you are one of the best romantic, sensual lemon writers that I have had the pleasure to read. Your description, detail and dialogue between Inu and Kag are perfect. You really show them 'making love' rather than just hard core fucking (sorry, bad potty mouth) not that that's a bad thing, but you do the slow burn very, very, hot and sensual. Thanks.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the smart side of him...*snort*...yeah right, like Inuyasha HAS a smart side!!
lol...i enjoyed the chapter and ESPECIALLY the ultra tangy lemony goodness...
keep it up!!
=^-.~^=
lol...i enjoyed the chapter and ESPECIALLY the ultra tangy lemony goodness...
keep it up!!
=^-.~^=
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! In all honesty I have never read a lemon fic that I liked this much! I love how Inuyasha is sweet, obnoxious, and caring like you make him to be. Please, don't change a thing! Just write more!