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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person nina
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Koga is one of my favorite characters of all time. I love stories about him or that include him. I like how you resolved Koga still trying to claim Kagome. I was holding my breath when I thought you were going to kill Koga. (I would have had to track you down and steal your keyboard lol and make you bring him back to life.) I'm glad you had Inu put Kag in her place already. Because Inu was correct in what he said. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person KagoKitty
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw...that's so adorable!! i can just see inu's face when kagome called him 'husband'!!
wow, kikyou means 'homecoming'*sno*snort* ironic, ne?? they must be short on names in the anime world...
=^-.~^=
person catesy
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh....your updating to fast, I cant review that quickly! lol

All three chapters were good. thank you for posting all three of them in a row. twas was nice. The only problem I have it that Koga seems a bit out of character. I mean just the way he was talking to Kagome at the spring just seemed not very Koga like.

I hope you don’t kill Koga off, I don’t think Kagome would like that much.
person LadyRei
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You put up 3 chapters before I could review one.... Oh well... I decided to review each chapter as I read it! Inuyasha-kun... I've never heard anyone use that before... how nice! Very good chapter... I'm off to read the rest!
person LadyRei
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I just read Chapter 11... what a funny chapter! Everyone just stared at the couple... Shippo's reaction was the cutest! I see that everyone does not approve of Inuyasha's decision though. I gotta wonder though... will Kagome REALLY let Inuyasha go through with going to hell with Kikyo??? Oh well... one more chapter..
person LadyRei
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay... the last review for the day. Wow... that fight scene was allyally pretty good. Not too gory...:) Now I really want to know if Inuyasha killed Kouga or not! Damn my stubborn curiousity! And Miroku losing his temper like that... it was perfect. I didn't expect Inuyasha to fight back as much as he did though. It still worked out great though. Anyways... keep it up.... and I'll be here to review. Oh yeah... one last thing. Would you mind translating a couple words from the chapters... mainly bakero, teme, adn usotsuki. (hope I spelled those right!) Alright... Oyasumi!
person psycho
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chappie update soon
person nina
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. You have such a great insight to Inu and Kag's feelings and emotions. I'm anxious to know where the story goes from here. I'm still banking on a happy ending.
person Mija
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*looks around in confussion* where the hell was I when all these terrific chaps came up??? I recall reading the first one and then nothing..I mean where the heck was I?? cause I know I love this fic and omg those lemons were totally hot...again im still confussed on why I didnt see the updates before or I would of read and reviewed..sigh..ooh well I sowwy but I hear now and I gotta tell you that you are a totally excellent wriand and as for humor or whatever in your fic?? I say keep doing what your doing now..I like the humor and the romance and lemons and the heart wrentching pain when Inu cried..still sniffling at that..my heart broke I tell ya just picturing him howling in pain and killing the poor tree as he fell to his knees and cried...awwwwwwwww sniffles my poor poor Inu baby...*sobs* ok ok Im calm anyhow as I said whatever your doing keep on doing it..your doing sooooo good and soo great as it is on this fic I dont see any reason for you to change anything..go with what your muse and imagination tell ya to do cause its working wonderfully for you as it is...again love this fic I can babble on all night about this but then I would never stop..God I love thi soo soooooo sweet and soo good sniffles..ty ty ty and update soon k?? pretty please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person catesy
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww…how sweet. Poor inu crying and poor Kagome. I think you captured the emotions you were going for wonderfully here. And you did a good job with Kagome making her as unselfish as she is in the manga. You live in Japan? That is really neat. Did you grow up in the U.S?

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