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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person snowfall
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the whole champaigne bit. It was very sensual. Your description was very good. Thanks
person Kaye
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First I would like to say that the wine/champange part was very erotic, at least in my mind. It was actually a food part that I could see. Great story, though I do wonder what Sesshy-chan has a plans for our heros. Granted the idea of him telling off Kikyo like that is a perfeomplompliment for the 1st movie. Great, great story! I love it!
person Megaborx
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful... another 2 chpaters down but the magic is sitll there....
only thing left to say is that by the end of this fic:

1.Inuyasha has to say "I love you, Kagome"
2. Kikyo goes to hell.... ALONE!!!!!!
3. Inuyasha and Kagome end up Married and have kids (im talking multiples here)

If you dont i will send my own demons after you and you will be tortured by bad reviews for the rest of ur writing days..
(just kidding)
Peace Out LOL
person shewny
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE AND UPDATE GOODIE!!
person Nina
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sess has just got to kill Kikyo eventually. She's such a bitch. But now I'm afraid of what Sess has in store for Inu and Kag. I know it's nothing good. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person KagoKitty
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol...the girls wanted to know if Inuyasha had a brother...it'd be REALLY somethin' if they got the chance to meet the lord of the western lands. *giggle* speaking of Sesshy-sama, i'm happy he's decided to put the dead clay doll in her place (well...for now, at least).
OH! to answer your question, yes...i am a dancer! the shit's the reason it took me so long to review!! *shakes fist at company owner* But...its all good and 'peachy' for now. *lol*
toodles,
=^-.~^=
person Megaborx
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutly fantastic keep it coming,
person Liz
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kami! you can't leave me there?!?!?! ::bites off back of pen:: come on... it was just getting good....lol You MUST email me when you write more... I like this story alot. ::Grins:: it's been a great story so far.... i want more!!! NOW!!!! GRRRRRRRRRR!!!!

With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
person LadyRei
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goshat hat whole Hojo thing was... great! Honestly, I'm speechless. That was simply hilarious. I loved it! Alrighty... I'm putting up a short review tonight... going to bed soon... but that was great. Keep it up!
person Shjorpa
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard during that last chapter! You have a talent for writing comedy :D I just wanted to say that I really liked your story. Keep up the good work.
/Shjo

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