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i dont now what to say....Im glad inuyasha is realising his true feelings and all, but im saddened to her hes still on with his vows,
that love no longer exists, thereby negating ne vows they made, him laving kagoithaitha pup s highly dishonurable...

And the Kikyou/Naraku thing is just plain creepy, but as long as they both die n the end Kag and Inu end up together then alls wel with the world...

All and All a distressful but well written chappie.... plz let it end good til next time

*glares with rage* noooooo how could you leave it off there. UPDATE SOON

love ya

I am realy picky on what i read and got to tell you. I love this. keep on going. have me on the edge of my sene gne going online almost 9 time a day to see if you updated yet.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! lol. I love your writing style, and you get the characters so right ( well in my mind anyway ^^;; ) I have only read up to the 23 chappie, so im gonna read the 24th now! Love it! Please keep a goin! Ill kepp reviewin I promise! ^.~

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mi-chan ( kohana)

::finished reading chappie:: ::gaaaaasp:: wow! That was an awesome plot turn ^^;; It's gonna take alot to get rid of her now isnt it? ^.~ I'm just hoping somehow, in some way Inu-kun gets out of his promises...but i'm always like that..the fluff queen, who wants everything to work out in the end. I can always just keep reading and hope though ne? ^.~

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mi-chan ( kohana )

OMG!!!!!! I'm sorry for not reviewing before, butve bve been keeping up with this fic, and I can't hold it in any longer. THIS ROCKS SO HARD IS UN-FREAKING-BELIEVABLE!!! I think I've read only two others that are anywhere near as good, and they no longer update, so that puts you over the top. Congrats on 5000+ readers, and hopefully a future influx of reviews(you deserve more), and know that I and many others are waiting for your next chapter with baited breath. Now, on to technicalities: The small mistakes are nothing for you to really worry about; I'm more concerned with the small habit of switching tenses I've noticed. Im not criticizing or anything, but try to look a bit closer, and keep them talking and thinking in the same time period. For example, a couple of times IY was thinking of the past, but saying things as if they were happening right then. It's a little confusing. I hope you don't get offended or anything, but that's what reviews are for, right? To offer constructive criticism(I hate that word)and help other writers make their stories better. I'm also a fic writer, but I write for my college's anime club manga. IY is by far my fave, and you do it justice. Keep writing, PLEASE!

Dammit, HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP THERE??
*sniff* poor kagome...
you...
This is all YOUR fault!!
*giggle* okay, okay...a lil drastic, I know...but good acting, neh? lol.
I'm glad you enjoyed the fetch pictures...they're so adorable!! And I do agree, their hilari

Oh...*clucks tongue*...looking for a hook up with one of my bubbies, huh?? *giggle* Sure you'd like one...BUY ONE GET ANOTHER AT 1/4 THE USUAL PRICE!! lol...
hoping for that scene btw inu and kikyou really soon...be scoufor for it!!
much love to ya!!
=^-.~^=

thats an awesome fic!!!!!! it took me two days to read it... but GOD!! you left it at the best part. you have to update !!!!!
you have greats lemons... great history... very original.. is so sad see what kagome does for inuyasha... but i love the lemons parts.. i was looking for a lemon fic... about the after mating part... and i got it!! all thanks to you!!!!!!!! ^.^ you've made my day! update soon!!!!!!!! and i read about you in a hospital.. are you okay? i hope so.. see ya!! update!

I hope that the conclusion I am drawing is that he tells her the heck off! Oy! What I wouldn't give to bitch-slap Kikyo into the afterlife myself! Anyhoo, I loved this chapter as well, and Sesshouamru and Inuyasha have a brotherly moment, that was sweet, so sweet in fact it gave me a cavity, no...wait! It was already there?! *^_^* Anyhoo, I just hope that Inuyasha has the strenght to tell Kikyo his plans, and no too to hell with her right then...Poor Kagome...

Oh my goodness that was a good chapter. I just hope you can get another one out as soon as you can. This one was mind blowing. For Sess and Inu to come to terms and for Sess to approve of Inu's choice for a mate is one thing, to say that he will make sure that Inu makes the right choice to stay with Kag that just blows you away.