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Um... wow

I found this story about four days ago and I haven't stopped reading it since
this is one of the best fanfics I've read and it just keeps getting better and better
(although hopefully not sadder, its not good for 23 yrs. construction workers to cry over
stories)
can't wait for the next chapter

Chapter 38 -- Finally got to chapter 38.. Wow what a story. This is great!

This story is breathtakingly Exquisite. o my god its so hard to write a review for this piece. the way that kagome loves inuyasha unconditionly is beautiful and moving. the emotions that you feel when reading this are well you feel like your feeling inuyasha's pain or kagomes sadness it puts the reader in the character's shoes and are able to sense everything they go through. you have created a masterpiece i cant wait for the next chapter. you are one of the few gifted writers in this place. i love it.
thank you
twilight kiss

ps. HAPPY HOLIDAYS

I was touched by Kagome and Inuyasha's goodbyes.

Made me cry.

thank you you bitch!! lol Please don't make this a dark fic! I honestly hope that everything gets resolved and fixed to a happier ending... and NOT a bitterly happy. I understand the writing issue... I have the same problems, I get off track from some of my chapter stories and write little one shots that end up being ... Chapter stories it's insanity. lol

goodluck
Heather.

BTW!

I really like how you made her eyes blue in this... just as the origninal manga was created ^_^

WOW! I AM ABSOLUTELY HOOKED ON THIS STORY NOW! I LOVE IT!

I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I found this story and it took me 2 days to finish,
Damn those interuption, ie. going xmas shopping with family, could not say no
to the family. Anyways finish today I can't wait till the next update. Poor Kagome
I love her she, if anyone need a happy ending she does, her and Inuyasha. Will he
find out about the pup? Why was Midoriko return? Will she expose Kikyo for what
she really is? I see the smile on your face right now saying "Keep reading, Keep reading"
Till next update have a safe and happy holiday ;D

As our lips parted, I cradled her against me and spoke softly in her ear.

“I love you… Ka—go—me…”

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T.T you made me cry. I got that. When they first met she says "I am Kagome Ka-go-me!" and so they are at the place where they first met and he said that! I dont know if you did it intentionally but......I cried! Damn that Kikyo! I am so glad she is dead in the episodes now! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

I just found this story, and spent the last day and a half reading it. This has to be both one of the most beautiful and saddest things I've ever read. I've been looking for loopholes for the past couple of chapters, but have to admit that I don't have a clue about how this is going to work out to anybody's satisfaction! Please, please, please put me out of my misery soon (lol)! And (although I haven't read any of them yet) if any other reviewers don't like it, too bad--it is, after all, YOUR story! Take care, and try to update soon! (There's a cookie in it for you if you do....)