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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person Gaby
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why you would think we would stop reading for this chapter. I liked it a lot. ^_^ Hopefully Inuyasha will finally figure out what is really important to him and drop Kikyo like a bad habit. Very nice story! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Kagome reacts to Naraku's tricks. *Goes behind a building and turns back into true form complete with white baboon hide* Mwa ha ha ha... J/K *throws off hide* Meh.
person Inuzands
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh, I think I see where this isng. ng. I think. (giggles psychotically) But maybe not. As always, such a good chapter and awesome writing and I am now counting the hours until you update! I have Kleenex ready for the drama. And I'm totally okay with Zandy -- made me laugh :)
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, i hope nothing bad happens to kagome's baby; that's basicly all she has left of inuyasha. please dont let naraku hurt her; that's the last thing inuyasha needs, especially since kikyo's there
person snowfall
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, and, you do it so well.
person MegaBorX
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah its coming to a close but please update soon my mind cant take it much longer... who will live who will die,, will they find peace or solace after the battle.

I absolutly love the story and this chapter was no excen...n... can i ask one thing..... (please hold true to your earlier promise)
and if a certain hanyou, modernday miko, kitsune, houshi,tajiya, demon lord, ends up getting hurt i will have no choice but to never read anotehr chapter... i kow this is your work but please on the behalf of not only myself but the +8000 other people who have read this story ( i swear we will make it over +10,000) plz let the two have then ending that we all know that they deserve (wink wink... i couldnt care less what time they live in or if they even seal the well , i just want toasee a certain clay bitch in hell along with Naraku... plzplplzplzplzplzplpzlzplzplzpzl i have very little power but plz take my lowly little poster oipinion into consideration


Thats all "we" can ask of you.....

Thank You and Please write again
person LadyRei
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... very nice and cliffy. y I y I didn't review last time. I'm going to warn you now.. I have finals coming up, so I can't review as much, please don't be mad... I will when I can! Anyways, here's a giant tray of cookies for you till then! *hands you 100 cookies* I hope that lasts you till then. I still love you... *puppy dog pout* Keep going, and I'll review when I can.... just make the ending good for me, okay? Love ya!

ReiHino
person KagoKitty
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NONONONONONONOOOOOOOO!! how can you just...just END IT THERE??
GAHHHHHHHHHHH!!
even though dragging inu through the forest and finding out sesshy can beat inuyasha's time on eating ramen...why stop there?? The battle, girl...THE BATTLE is here!! I'm all nervous now to see what you're gonna do...
*bites finger* ...one more promise was made, too...and this one had better be kept...
*sigh* My ranting isn't gonna help...tour bites...only 7 more shows! *mock enthusiaism* Whoooopeeeee...
I did think it was hilarious when Kagome lashed out at the doctor, though...that was really cute.
see ya!!
=^-.~^=
person maria
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean that we're going to hate you after this chapter?! All I have to say is that Kikyo better not come back to mess things up. That is the lthinthing Inu& Kag need now.
person MelMuff
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This just gets better and better. A battle with Naraku. Will it be the final battle? And will Kagome get to tell Inu Yasha about their baby? Will they both survive this battle and live to tell about it? I sure hope they do. This is too suspenseful. *Biting nails* I'm on the edge of my .Me.
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you do something really, really mean you had better fi in in the same chapter or I will have to hunt you down... :P LOL... Just Kidding. But please don't make it too hard to bear. Anyway... Love that chapter just as much as the rest... Keep going, you're driving us insane. And I'm glad you're keeping your brother busy.all all missed you.