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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o! Sneaky bastard!

* grabs Naraku and starts to choke him * Take that! And this too! And more oft! Et! Err!

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person LadySilverwings
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop reading this story over and over and over again! It's so good! Major uber props to you!!! *bows humbly before you*
person Kathie
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, your story is awesome!!! Come on hurry up with more please im dying here to find out what happens....*starts to panic* ahhhhh....if i dont come on please email me >.< Oh yea this part was interesting. Nice suspense ^.^ weee hehehe. I bookmarked your story so i can find it easily. Now please hurry up with the next chapter or else. *grins in an evil way and starts to transform into a demon* Come on my eyes are turning red and my teeth are growing to wolf type teeth. *mwuahs* I might cry if it will take you long >.<
person maria
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW can Inuyasha be sooo completely STUPID? Kagome is supposed to be his wife & he pulls that shit?!! She s tos to leave him after the fight. Enough is enough.
person cloverwish
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please pleeeeeeaaaaaasssseee get ride of kikyo I hate her so much please have Demon Inuyasha make her dead again although she already is dead or undead.
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's not too bad... I like it. And how could I be a beta reader for you if a stop reading the story when somet I d I don't like happens... It just doesn't work. So I'll be here no matter what you write. Either way I still love the story and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for you to do another chapter.
person Kohana
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeeee! That's so clever! I thought he might have tried to do something else to them, but this is much better! Grjob!job!!! I hope you update soon! I'm not going to be able to stand it. One question though....does inuyasha still have the testsusaiga? Because ..normally he cant transform with it. ooo? but is this because his mate is in danger or something?! lol. well i hope you update soon! Great job! I love it lots!

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person Nina
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty fucking awesome. Naraku is so evil. But Kagome can be so easily persuaded sometimes. What more does she need from Inuyasha for him to prove that he loves her. How can she listen to Naraku like that. She is so stupid sometimes. Well, can't wait for the next chapter. CYA
person MegaBorX
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okok fury-chan.... u have my trsut that ill read to the nd.... however i ratherlike ths chapter and have an idea where u moght be headed... well i have several and we'll see which ones play out.... (hopefully not inu's worst nightmare) but thats up to you.... ty for consdiering our wishes neway...

Please finish it soon.....(prays to kama-sama that he's right about this)
person KagoKitty
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the tissues will be free this time...'cause I can just FEEL like something BIG's gonna happen and Kitty'll start the waterworks.
*giggle* Good job on the action part...I always suck at fight scenes...but your's was VERY very good!! *psst*...only 6 more shows! *shakes booty and does patented happy dance* I so excited!!
Aww...don't worry girl...I'll never leave ya! You're right, this is your story and it needs to go as you've probably planned it!! And I'll be behind you ALL the way, too, chica!!
Much love to ya!!!
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