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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person lil_angel
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH this is one of the best stories i have ever read my friends suggested to me reading this fic and at first i didnt want to but im so glad i did you have a true talent for writing its filled with so much passion i wish i could write like this anyway thisstory is so sad and happy at the same time and the parts you have written so far about the last battle is amazing i cant wait for the next update please hurry I WANT MORE
person ramona grimalkit
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Sorry for not reviewing in a while, but damn! That last chappy was something else! I'm waiting with baited breath to read the next one(s), and I just have one teeny-tiny request: Please don't let Kagome lose the pup...it's all she'll have of Inu if he still goes to hell with Kikyou (not that I'm happy about that turn of events, but it's your story, and since I like you I'll trust your judgment on that). the action flows beautifully, the scenes are heartwrenching, and your cliffys are killer--I'd recommend this story to a lot of my friends...if they watched Inuyasha or even knew what it was. *sigh* Not everyone can be a convert or an otaku, right? Anyway I just wanted to say this fic does any otaku proud and you should be very impressed ith yourself for making it so close to the end. NOW JUST INISH ALREADY, and I think you might find yourself one of the most popular people on AFF. (if you're not already...I've never seen a single fic with so many hits before!) ^_^
person ramona grimalkit
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know it's nitpicking, but I just noticed some typos in my review, and I want to correct one of them: I meant to write FINISH ALREADY! I forgot the "F". Don't mind me; I'm an English major (w is is how I picked up on your tenses! ^_^) and little things like my own typos bug me. Anyway, you just keep doing what you're doing; the last chappy should be great!

person MegaBorX
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWnoonononononononononon
finish it up please i beg of you finish it up..
AHHH Kohaku miroku sango kouga ahhh
WTF IS GOING ON!!!!!!!!!!
INUYASHA KAGOME SNAP THE FUCK OUT OF IT.!!!!!!!
MAke it stop furychan make it stop!!!!!!!!!!
HURRY UP AND DO IT ALREADY AHHH UR DRVING ME MAD...
Bad chappie (ok so im lieing) but no more cliffhangers ahhhh finish it up amke him stop make him stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz fury chan... why must u play with our emotions!!!!! no sdhe cant die she cant
person maria
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, maybe saying that Kagome should leave Inu was a little harsh. I just think that he takes for granted the fact that Kagome loves him, and is always there. He needs to learn that if he keeps leaving her for Kikyo she may not always stay. And lets face it, what normal gis gos going to put up with him cheating on her all the time?(sorry that's like almost a paragraph but I wanted to explain my other review. It was also colored by the fact that I HATE Kikyo) I felt really bad for Sango and Miroku. I'm glad that they are still alive. I hope they can save him before they kill Naraku. I'm also interested to see how you save Kagome from Inu's demon side. I hope that it's before he hurts really bad. She can't take too much abuse because she's pregnant, and you don't want her ose ose the baby.
person Inuzands
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, only part of what I thought would happen actually happened. ....sighs, half-buried in Kleenex.....but I was a little bit right. Just a little. Now I'm sad cuz it looks like everyone's dying. But I trust that Inuyasha and Kagome won't kill eachother, right? Right? RIGHT!!?? Anyways, I don't know what else to say except that I can't wait for the next chapter!
person monsterkittie
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...a great morning. Relaxing in front of the computer, a bowl of ramen in my hand (chicken flavored), superb fan fic on the screen. What more could I want? Oh, right...an update??? Please???? Hey, wait...you got Kagome all injured and almost dead and stuff....what about the baby??? *sniff* say the pup will be okay... pretty please???
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my shit... That's so sad... You're a meanie... J/K. Keep going. I hope you update soon. Stopping in the middle of the final battle is just plain cruel. LOL. Anyway, luv ya too... Keep it up.
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o! No! This can't happen! Waaaa-hhhhhaaaaa! ~_~ Dammit Naraku! Don't make me come over there! Bastard! And Kikyo the bitch! Ack! Also, sorry for not reading and updating, life has been hell! Ack!

* goes away muttering and cursing Naraku and Kikyo under her breath *
person na’¨na
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, haven't been here in a while!

The story has really gotten good :D *sends a hug*, don't worry, it might make me cry, but I'll keep reading.

I'm hoping it isn't what I think it is though, that'd be really sad. ;.;